Fallen Hero Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 interseting. well i ain't sure what the burst mode would look like for my digimon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Hmmmmmm......*Imaginary Mode: ENGAGE!* How 'bout this: A gigantic, robotic warrior with magnets as shoulder and knee pads, a magnet-shaped head, and with magnets as a shield on his back like Wargreymon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 erm... thanks for thinking of something but it won't work as the mega is surprisingly different to the rest of the evolution line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Zomg, what the funk is with the constant 'masters'? :O Belphemon won't have one, because that would be just overkill ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 we're only saying what they would like if they did have burst modes that's all fenrir. it's not a definate thing in this fan fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Hey, Fenrir! Seen my new AVI? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 Yes. Sasori = Win Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 7, 2009 Report Share Posted May 7, 2009 My thoughts exactly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 just to keep this thread alive i'm going to ask this question: whats your fav digimon season? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Season 2 and 3 2: Veemon is my fav! At least, one of them. 3: The Digi-Modify ability is cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 How is it, that everyday, you guys add like 15 more posts to this? Also, Fallen, could you please stop revealing all my 'possible' plots, you're actually making me have to be creative. And what do you mean that bursts and other super ultimates won't be definite? Also, please note that BK's ultimate's name was thought of in the shower and this is where their lines start to seperate. Oh yeah, discuss Naruto in this thread again, and I will not update for a week. [spoiler=Chapter 20: Written in Blood] ‘METAWARLOCKMON! ALTRONWARLOCKMON!’ they both shouted and the ice prison shattered in a bright light. Once any vision returned, Blues and Skull faced a chilling sight. Demi had now become seven feet tall and wore white and red chest armour, with his cape attached at the shoulders. He wore steel toed boots, with each knees adorned with a golden eagle. The abdominal area had the same pants as before. He wore a pair of iron gauntlets that went to the elbows, and had his shirt covering the rest. Demi now wore a helmet, with the eye guard lowered, revealing only the lower half of his face; white hair hung form the back. In his hand, was a glorious light grey staff, with a pair of angel wings at the top. Perched in between the base of the wings was the white orb, crackling with energy. BK was similar, except that his shoulders had small demon wings pairs extending from them, and his boots were marked with skulls. Like always, he had the large pointed hat, except it was slightly bent and had metallic patches. His staff was tipped with a small demon that held the orb in its hands above its head. It crackled with energy as well. ‘So they Digivolved, big deal. We have more experience as ultimates’ Skull said, with little conviction. Demi just smiled. ‘I’ll take Blues’ he said in a deeper voice. ‘Fine, I guess I can afford to play with Skull for a while’ BK replied. Demi smiled again as he dashed at Blues with inhuman speed and launched him into the air. BK followed suit on Skull and they both defied gravity before Demi and BK began fast combo punch and kick attacks on the one they had chosen. This brutal assault ended when both of them vanished, only to slam down on either of them from above, driving them straight into the earth and creating small craters. Skull got up slowly, only to find that he was surrounded by twenty BK clones all circling him in the air. Blues also got the same treatment with Demi. They back into each other slowly, only to have a larger ring made of all forty. BK just laughed as spheres of light or dark energy began to charge in their hands. ‘STOP!’ Steph shouted. The real twins looked at Steph, who was running towards them. A sneer was seen on Demi’s face, as he and BK turned to face their victims. ‘We need them for questioning’ Steph added a little more forcefully. The spheres in their hands seem to fluctuate, growing bigger and smaller, until they just crush them and fly down to her, their clones evaporated. ‘Very good’ she answered and got out a small communicator. ‘Reapermon, we have the subject, please bring them to the prisons, and be as rough as you like with them’ she said smugly. A rather large portal appears above the Meras and two chains come out of it and grabs them. They yell as they are pulled in. ‘Demi, now that you’ve evolved, we can revive Jiji’ Aban said, hugging Demi, but he just pushes him off. ‘Enough of that’ Demi replied coldly and slammed his staff into the ground. They all warped to the hospital. Steph entered the cryo room happily, only to find that Jiji’s pod was opened, and a disturbed Piddomon was looking into it. ‘No, I thought we had more time’ Steph said in shock. The angel shook his head. ‘Whatever weapon was used, drained his energy until it consumed him. I am sorry, Lord Jiji, was deleted from our world. We grieve for his death, I assure you’ he replied and left with a folder. Steph’s left eye twitched as Gaomon came over to her, he waved his gloves, to find no response. ‘That means, that Steph is the official mayor of the Holy City’ Keras said. BK said nothing, he just shoved past the group and left. Demi followed him out. ‘They seem so different, now that they have reached ultimate. I guess they think they’re too good for us. I thought I was the only one’ Kevin remarked. Aban made an annoyed clucking sound and left, Keras followed him out. ‘Come on, we’d best leave’ Vixen whispered to Charlie and she pushed him out. ‘Umm, we’re going to go sleep’ Lydia said slowly. She dragged Jason out with her, leaving Kevin and Steph alone. ‘I have the strangest feeling that they hate me’ Kevin said sarcastically. Steph sobbed silently, tears streaming down her face and dripping on the floor. ‘You really cared about him, didn’t you?’ he asked her. Steph said nothing, only the rhythmic sobbing that was getting louder. Kevin looked at Gaomon for help. He nodded in reply and Kev left quickly. Gaomon closed the door and helped Steph to a chair. ‘Erm, this is my first time’ Gaomon replied, taking off his scarf and gloves. Steph looks up at him, and half smiles. ‘You are my little Gaoby’ she sobbed. Aban had caught up with the twins and confronted them. ‘What is up with you two? DO you think you’re better than s now?’ he demanded. The twins stood, and said nothing. ‘Are you mutes now?’ he asked. ‘No, we juts have nothing to discuss, in case you have forgotten, Jijimon is dead, and we should be mourning’ BK replied in annoyance. He walks straight past Aban, causing Demi to follow again. ‘Those guys are WAY to different’ Aban said to Keras. ‘That was a bit harsh dear brother’ Demi said as they got out of earshot. ‘What, a great yet sadistic leader dies and you want me to be all peaches and cream, namby pamby let’s all go lick Barney the Dinosaurs pussy? You forget yourself my brother. This isn’t just a battle for the Holy City, it’s now so much greater. We’re fighting for our lives and this world. That Dark Council ants the world, and we’re destined to stop their oblivion’ BK replied. ‘Wow, since when were you so mature?’ Demi asked. ‘Since I realized being an ultimate meant stripping away childish antics’ BK answered. ‘That comes with age brother, evolving means we grow stronger’ Demi pointed out. ‘Not always the case my brother’ BK replied and walked off. Demi sighed in annoyance and followed him. Lydia had been playing spy, following Demi and BK until they had stopped. ‘Secret glomp attack’ she shouted and hugged Demi. ‘Yes?’ Demi asked. ‘I need you guys to get my brother back’ she asked them. ‘We can’t do that. We don’t know where he is, or for that matter, we don’t want to. He went of his own free will, we can’t change that’ Demi explained. ‘But you must, I’ve not seen him in ever, and there he goes with some evil girl. We won’t stand for this’ Lydia protested, grabbing Jason’s arm. ‘Look, I’m sure your brother will return in time, but, I don’t trust that girl. We’re going to the Dragon Corps HQ to discuss the battle plan, will you join us?’ BK asked. ‘No, we have to go to bed, it is very late now, and we can at least sleep easily now without Blues and Skull on the loose’ she answered and walked off. ‘What a strange little girl’ Demi remarked. ‘I can think of another one’ BK said sarcastically. ‘Who?’ ‘Think about it’ was BK’s reply. ‘No seriously, answer me’ Demi said. ‘No’ BK said with a smirk and left. It was later at night, the inhabitants of the city were sleeping. In the prisons, Reaper had his down on his desk and he was snoring loudly. The Knightmon had fallen asleep as well, when a figure in a black outfit streaked their way past. ‘Forgive me, but this is for my family’ the figure said. They snuck past each door until they was outside both of the Meras cells. The figure used Kohenkyo to enter Skull’s cell and drew a kunai. They silently slit his throat. Before he could gasp, the figure shoved another kunai into his mouth and pierced the roof of his mouth. ‘Silence’ they hissed. The figure turned their attention to Blues, to which they had done the same. ‘The venom on those kunai will melt them as well as destroy Blues and Skull. Mother, Father, this was for you’ they whispered as their vengeance was done. Blues was gagging as was Skull, but the kunais seemed to dampen even their fires, which were growing dimmer. Skull managed a look at the figure, which, in the dim light, had a yellow tone. ‘I steep my hands in your blood, to avenge those who meant so much to me, those who cared for me. Those who you took away’ they coldly told him and vanished. Skull managed some inaudible words, before succumbing to the venom and collapsing into unconsciousness. The alarms sounded in the early morning after Reaper awoke from his own little naptime, he was being assaulted by Steph. ‘How could let an assassin get in?’ Steph demanded. ‘I didn’t, all I remember was receiving some coffee late at night, then suddenly feeling drowsy. I thought it was my old age, so I rested my head and dosed off. Even my Knightmon fell asleep, so whoever made the coffee or carried it drugged it’ Reaper countered. ‘And you, a famed bounty hunter, couldn’t detect it?’ Steph asked. ‘As I said, I am old Mayor. These Knightmon are not even a quarter my age, they’re meant to be our elite guard and they couldn’t detect it. I don’t think anyone could, it is odourless and tasteless. Whoever made it is very skilled in the arts of poisons’ Reaper countered again, folding scythe across his arm. ‘You’re lucky you’re the best jailor we got. Have their digi-eggs sent to the nursery’ Steph said to him and left, getting to her house where the group were waiting for her. Demi and BK had de-digivolved over night, and didn’t seem too happy. ‘Guys, it would seem that questioning is cut short. Blues and Skull were assassinated, probably by a Dark Council assassin’ she reported. They all began talking amongst themselves, except Vixen, who seemed uncomfortable. ‘What is it?’ Charlie asked, feeling her discomfort. ‘Nothing, I’m just worried that they were finished before I could do so’ she replied. ‘I know your vengeance meant much, but your parents can rest now’ Charlie told her. She smiled at him, a guilty smile. ‘You’re right’ she said fakely. ‘Also, I have asked Baba, and we can spare with the Dragon Corps to improve our fighting ability for the next time Naomi attacks’ Steph added. ‘I kinda miss Dom’ Aban said. ‘I can imagine, you’re so used to his abuse, it must be difficult to not go to a corner without looking around it for signs of him’ Gaomon said smugly. Aban flashed him an angry look, but that didn’t break Gaoby’s smile. They entered the arena by midday. Baba was sitting in the stand whilst the Dragon Corps were in the centre of the arena. ‘Now, for fairity, Vixen and Charlie will fight WarGrowlmon in a land fight. Gaomon and I will fight AeroVeedramon in an aerial bout, Aban and Keras will battle Cyberdramon in a match of brute force, with Kevin and Magnet fighting both Coredramon’ Steph said. ‘Why don’t we get to battle?’ Lydia demanded. ‘Because there aren’t enough combatants, besides, you guys won’t be fighting our battles, your partners are there for protection’ Kevin answered. ‘Whatever, in any case, Vixen, Digivolve’ Charlie commanded. Vixen was surrounded by a purple sphere, it shattered to not reveal Taomon, but a purple version or her. ‘Doumon’ she shouted. ‘What the crap?’ Charlie asked. Baba gasped loudly, as she got up form her seat. ‘A digisoul, stained by vengeance, becomes one with darkness. Corrupting their own evolution’ she said. ‘But how?’ Charlie asked. ‘It should be obvious, I killed Blues and Skull’ Vixen replied gravely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 HOLY F*CKING CRAP!!! That's all I got to say about Vixen... About the chapter: Damn good as usual! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 why thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 You know, if you EVER make another Digimon Fan Fic, make sure that I can suggest characters to it! I'm really trying to improve to make evil characters, as well as Neutral ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 ‘I kinda miss Dom’ Aban said. ‘I can imagine' date=' you’re so used to his abuse, it must be difficult to not go to a corner without looking around it for signs of him’ Gaomon said smugly. Aban flashed him an angry look, but that didn’t break Gaoby’s smile.[/quote'] XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 How is it' date=' that everyday, you guys add like 15 more posts to this? Also, Fallen, could you please stop revealing all my 'possible' plots, you're actually making me have to be creative. And what do you mean that bursts and other super ultimates won't be definite?[/quote'] Sorry i'll do my best not to predict anymore plots but i didn't expect to see Vixen to get her revenge so soon. I'll only said, to Kuja, it won't be definite as only MirageGaogamon only has a burst mode and the rest doesn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 and you say i couldn't devise some? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 i didn't say that at all. i just wasn't too sure if you were going to have Burst Modes in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 It wa assumed. And kuja, well, i thought i'd might sequal this, but, that is assuming Demi and BK survive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 Well, of course they'll do! It's your fic, right?;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 It wa assumed. And kuja' date=' well, i thought i'd might sequal this, but, that is assuming Demi and BK survive[/quote'] well don't assume stuff like that, if i had any thoughts like that i would say them. also why will a sequel only be made if Demi and BK are still alive? i'm sure with the level of creativity you've shown so far that you could do a sequel without them or at least make a short story for each character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 I can't believe how much evil there is in this fan fic. so many corrupt people and digimon or at least them having dark thoughts in their mind, is there any good people in this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 About the Theme Songs, I recognize one! It's the "Still Alive" one. MY friend played it to me, and I can't get it out of my head! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 8, 2009 Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 who's theme song is that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2009 you see fallen, the secret is in the frosting, but i'll never tell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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