fenrir Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Awwwwwwwwwwwww No machine gun blasting D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 that may happen in the next chapter fenrir Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 i've updated the character section, into heroes, villains and unknown. naomi has been given a theme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 good good. can't wait for the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 as do the others Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 i know that but i want to find out how Vixen as Taomon compares to Blues and/or Skull Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 yes, and maybe, i new digivice function Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 :shock: a new function?ok there's already digivolving, jogress and teleporting. so it could be warp or bio-merge digivolution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 at chapter 18? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 it was more wishful thinking. it will be annoying while i try to figure what the function is. EDIT: could it be like tamers with the card swiping to power-up the digimon. somehow even i think thats wrong but i thought i should ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 they don't have cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 I knew that but even so Jiji could have hidden them safely away somewhere Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 No cards please. That would be gay. Incredibly gay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 ok fenrir it isn't going to be that anyway it was just me trying to guess what this new function in the digivices will be. have you got any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Nope. My brain hasn't been working this week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 well i can't think of anything else so we'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out what it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Where would he hide those card Fallen? In his beard? Don't be absurd. Also, apparently this chapter's title contains no suggestive material. [spoiler=Chapter 18: Her Name is Naomi. That’s I Moan backwards] Taomon stood before Blues and Skull, her eyes down to a death glare at them both. Neither moved, waiting for the other to attack. The Tamers and their partners were forced on the sidelines, be incapable of helping. The opposing forces had also been told to remain out of the conflict. The only one who wasn’t staring at the two sides was Demi, who was looking intently at Taomon, he sounded as if he was muttering something very fast. ‘Talisman of Light’ Vixen shouts quickly and draws her magical brush, where a thousand small symbols were painted, releasing small beams of energy. Skull immediately runs in front and swings his chain around, creating a barrier that stops the beams. ‘Metal Fire Ball’ he countered once the barrage had stopped. He opened his mouth and liquid metal spheres on fire began to fire, putting Taomon on the run, ducking and weaving past. Any that missed clung to whatever they hit, fabrics, buildings. ‘Thousand Spells’ she shouted. Vixen began spinning very fast and many red slips of paper flew through the air at Skull. They clung to his body and began to combust, until they exploded. The smoke from the explosion quickly blew away, to find that Skull was three feet taller. ‘You don’t know much about the Meramon line, we thrive on fire and anything combustible, including magic slips of exploding paper’ Blues said and opened his mouth. ‘Ice Fireball’ he roared and began launching blue fireballs after Taomon, a few accidentally hitting Skull. ‘Hey, no team killing’ he shouted, despite not even getting hurt. ‘Sorry bro, misfire’ Blues’ apologized. Vixen had already gotten out of their firing range, but not out of her own. ‘Talisman Star.’ A large symbol is painted, and it shatters into hundreds of shards that cut through Blues and Skull, turning them into nothing but wisps. The tamers cheer, until the wisps begin to reconverge and recreate them. ‘I think she is underestimating us’ Blues said. Skull nodded and began pulling some his chains. With a successful swing, the chain wraps around Vixen’s ankle and pulls her down, the flames leaving a burning imprint. Blues hold his hands out in front of Vixen. ‘Cold Flame’ he hisses, launching a large jet of blue flame. Vixen braces, but a large barrier stops the attacks and releases her. ‘She didn’t even shout Talisman Spell’ Charlie said. BK looked at Demi, who was still chanting. ‘She can win on her own’ he said. Demi stopped and looked at his brother. ‘I know’ he replied. Vixen used this moment to get her paintbrush and smashed Skull’s face with the blunt end before it was set on fire. ‘Gentlemen, would you mind enlightening me as to why you have failed yet again to capture this miserable town’ a cold and feminine voice asked. Blues and Skull immediately fell to their knees. ‘Forgive, Miss Naomi’ they both said. In the large hole that had been ripped into Hospital Town’s wall, was a girl in a black dress and skirt, there was white lace underneath the skirt. She wore knee high black boots, each adorned with a bat at the knee. A red bow was perched over her chest and a larger one at the back above her butt, the trails going down to her ankles. Her hair was done up in two side tails and was a brownish-blond color. Her face had a beautiful look, but wore a cold expression, brought on by her two dark brown eyes. Her nails were long, and painted red. ‘It would seem that it falls to me to capture the flag, much like the other invasions’ Naomi said in annoyance. She looks beyond the Meramon too the Tamers and the Digimon. ‘Why didn’t you report to e that there were other humans in this world, you told me I was the only one’ she said in anger at Blues. ‘It was meant to be kept from you, so you could concentrate on building your empire’ Skull pleaded. Naomi remained silent as she went over to Skull. In a quick swipe, she left four deep imprints into his chest. She turned on Blues and did they same, they were left moaning. ‘Clean yourselves up and leave, I am taking command of this operation’ she said unmercifully. ‘But, we were given command by our leader, you can’t’ Blues protested. She held his hand and smiled warmly, then she released him and glared. ‘Look, this is me not giving a sheet. Now get the f**k out of here! NOW!’ she shouted viciously. Both Blues and Skull got up and managed to run out of the hole, leaving Naomi to face Vixen. ‘What do we do? I can’t bring myself to hurt any human except Drake of course’ Vixen said. ‘We should find out her intentions first’ Charlie replied and walked forward to the scowling girl. ‘Who are you?’ he demanded. The girl replied with a swift jab to his stomach and walked past him. ‘I demand to see the leader of this town in order to negotiate terms of surrender’ she declared. ‘I’m afraid you can’t do that’ Steph replied. The girl ignored her. ‘Bring me the leader of this town in ten minutes, if not, this town will no longer be considered worthy of joining my empire and will be destroyed’ the girl repeated and walked away. ‘You can’t do this’ Aban protested. The girl stopped and flashed a side-glance. ‘I can, and I will’ she replied and left. ‘There is something about that girl I don’t like, and yet it seems so familiar’ Dominic said. ‘That’s because she’s you’ Lydia pointed out. ‘We can’t just sign over one of the most important cities in the Digital World’ Steph said. ‘Would you prefer her to obliterate one of the most important cities in the Digital World?’ Gaomon asked. ‘Of course not, besides, we beat her army already, what threat could she make?’ Steph replied. ‘I didn’t like the look in her eyes, it spoke of power, great power. I think she has her own partner’ Aban said. ‘Well, I doubt a brat like her could control a mega level, so, I’ll bet that it would be rookie or ultimate, I doubt she’d settle on champion’ Charlie put in, helping to treat Vixens burn. ‘Why would champion be odd instead of rookie?’ Keras asked. ‘Because rookies are easier to control, and I said ultimate because look at the way she handled Blues and Skull, they were like a pair of naughty kittens against her’ Charlie explained. ‘That is true, but, we can’t sell out the city’ Steph said. She was silent again, still thinking when Lydia and Jason came into the room with drinks. ‘Figured out how to beat Lady Dominic yet?’ she asked. Dominic as he grabbed his drink and remained silent. ‘I think we should challenge her to a one on one with her partner against one of ours. She doesn’t know the lines, so she can’t judge for power’ Demi suddenly said. ‘That is clever brother, and, if we trick her into challenging Demi or myself, we could beat her easily’ BK said. Steph shock her head. ‘No, alone, you could take out a moderately powerful ultimate, but what if she has a strong ultimate or a mega? You wouldn’t win. In addition, if you forgot, we’re still under Jiji’s pledge to protect, which we intend on doing. I think the best chance would be Astamon or Taomon. Mach is too large and would be vulnerable to smaller ultimates, and Infermon is an artillery style Digimon, unfit for close combat’ she said to them. ‘You’re right, I held my own against Blues and Skull, and Astamon would blow that Digimon into last week’ Vixen said. ‘But, you forgot, you are burnt and have limited use of your left leg, it would be a primarily aerial combat, which would be bad if the other is an aerial Digimon’ Charlie added. ‘The ten minutes are up, time to meet that little hussy’ Steph said. They stood at the hole when the girl reappeared and walked towards them, her dress blowing in a light breeze. ‘Are you prepared to sign over the city? Or would you prefer to watch it burn?’ She asked. ‘We unanimously feel that we should challenge you. We assume you have a partner, so, we’ll pit our partners against each other to see who wins the city’ Steph replied. The girl pondered this for a moment, and smiled. ‘Fine, I’ll make sport of this. But your valiance will make little difference, I always get what I want’ the girls replies and whistles. A small shape is seen in the hole, and it slowly becomes bigger to reveal a Salamon, it sits by her side. ‘What do you wish of me?’ it asked. ‘They challenge us to battle Sal’ she replied. ‘I see, then, it is their funeral’ it replied. ‘Now, I select the Renamon as the opponent’ the girl said. Charlie nodded and walked forwards. ‘Digivolve’ he commanded and Vixen did. ‘Ultimate battle is it? So be it’ the girl replied and pulled her left sleeve down to reveal a Digivice, it was grey. ‘Salamon, Digivolve’ she commanded. A black data sphere surrounded the small dog and it shattered to reveal a black and blue cat. ‘BlackGatomon’ it said. ‘Once more’ the girl orders. Another sphere encloses the cat. It shatters and a female demon is revealed. ‘LadyDevimon’ it declared. Taomon sweats a little as the LadyDevimon transforms her left arm into the Black Spear. ‘Have at you’ it shouts and flies at Vixen. She dodges but some of her right sleeve is torn. ‘Ready or not, here I come goldy locks’ Lady cried and raced after Vixen, who counters with her brush. They continue their attack and parry joust, never having an opening for attacks. Vixen gets in a swing that knocks Lady back, leaving a bruise on her cheek. She growls and begins a new attack. ‘Evil Wing’ she shouted and launched waves of dark energy bats. ‘Thousand Spells’ Vixen cried and launched hundreds of red papers. The attacks meet and explode, creating a large cloud. Lady immediately launches through the cloud and impales Vixens left shoulder. Vixen barely gasps as Lady pulls herself free and flies to a safe distance. ‘Had enough goldy?’ she mocked. Vixen was panting slowly, reaching for her left arm. ‘Don’t worry, your right arm will soon join it’ Lady declares and charges. Charlie was watching the battle, and was finding it hard to not look away. He watched the streak that was Lady and turns, he grips the Digivice and the screen glows. He looks at it to find he had activated a function. He turns and points it at Vixen. ‘Digi-modify, Staff of Elune’ he shouts, a bright red beam escaping the Digivice and striking Vixen. Lady kept charging and struck. The spear broke and was launched off, falling and embedding itself into a nearby rooftop. She looked in horror at the staff Vixen was holding in her right hand. It was solid gold and had a half circle at the top, decorated with bars that went through either side, a blue crystal rested in the center. ‘How can this be?’ she asked. Vixen drew a large purple circle and symbols appeared along the ring. ‘Talisman Mandala’ Vixen shouted, the point the staff at Lady’ The sphere vanishes and appears around her, revolving quickly and creating multiple images. The speed increases and the sphere charges with energy, ending in a large blue explosion. Lady falls to the ground with a crunch. The girl ran over and checked on her, to find she had been badly hurt. ‘You win this day Tamers, but know I will return to get you’ the girl cried and helped Lady escape the city. The Tamers cheered as Vixen landed, only to be supported by Charlie. ‘So, it would seem these Digivices have other functions besides Digivolution. They also contain weaponry designs based on our partners’ Aban marveled, looking at his own one. ‘We were lucky this day, but, that girl is not to be trifled with, I know we will see her again’ Gaomon said. Vixen smiled warmly as Charlie and Gaomon helped her to limp to the hospital. Her sleeves were both on their butts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 That was an awesome cat-fight! Never believed that it would be a LadyDevimon who would challenge Vixen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 I was half right with the digi-modify thing. it just didn't involve the card swiping to activate it. anyway great chapter. also Jiji probably would have hid the cards in his beard after all he did put the box with Kev's digivice in his beard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 I realised that personalised weaponry would be awesome after you mentioned the digi-soul thing Fallen, then it reminded me of the Geo Grey Sword, and bob's your uncle. And the beard thing was a joke, Jiji has a small fridge in his beard to store his favourite drinks. Oh yeah, did anyone guess LadyDevimon? I'm sure you thought it was going to be Angewomon right? Oh yeha, the chapter name is from the movie Van Wilder. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 As long as my character's is a sword or something at least something that would suit him. we could discuss it by pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 Hmm, I already have plans, don't worry, if you hate it, as anyone would say, tough titties Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 just as long as it's ok i won't need to open the Nine Gates of Hell upon you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 hmm, obviouslt it won't be a bow or something long range, although that is electro's current style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 2, 2009 Report Share Posted May 2, 2009 sword, gun, gunblade sort of thing is more of my style of weaponry. although a really big cannon will be ok as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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