fenrir Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 >.< Broken took my character idea and bend it around D: DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN Also, I liked the original pic '_' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 original pic for what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 The coredramon won't be their partners, they are needed in the dragon corps, and, in all irony, i have chosen 3 royal knights int he corps, wargrowlmon to gallantmon, aeroveedramon to ulforceveedramon, coredramons to examon, and the last being cyberdramoin which is just kick ass. might i add a 'filler filler filler filler, filler filler filler'. [spoiler=Chapter 17: Ice & Fire! Blues & Skull!] Steph had located Gaomon and Digivolved him to MachGaogamon. She stood on his shoulder as he ascended to get a better view of the city. The wind was blowing her skirt slightly. ‘What is the situation Gaoby? I understand that we are being attacked, but by what?’ she questioned. ‘From what the scouts said, we’re being bombarded by Icemon and Meteormon in a blitzkrieg assault, whoever is commanding these things must be nearby. Charlie and Vixen are already defending the inhabitants making it to safety and Aban with Keras is attempting to snipe them before they impact. In all, this is total hell’ Mach reported. ‘What about Dominic and Phasco? Not to mention Demi, BK, Kevin and Magnetmon’ Steph added. ‘Demi and BK are nowhere to be found, I assume they either ran or are currently defending another part of the city. That goes for Kevin as well. He and Magnetmon went to the breached wall in attempts to stop the invading attack forces, which consist of Hyogamon, Meramon, SnowGoblimon and Firamon’ Mach replied. ‘An ice and fire invasion, that doesn’t seem right. But you didn’t respond to my question about Dom’ Steph said. ‘We cannot find him, odds are, he is probably right where the action is’ Mach replied and took off for the front lines. Dominic was staring at the girl, who stared back. She slowly walked forward and hugged Dom, who had no choice but to hug her back. ‘Lydia, how did you get to this world?’ he asked her. She remained silently, except only to yell and punch him in the stomach. He doesn’t gasp, but gives her a funny look. ‘I thought that would work, sorry. But, I don’t know how we got here. After you hadn’t returned home, Jason and I went to find you, only to see a weird portal. We when through it and magically appeared in the Digital World. It was a foresty area, and we were attacked, until the Dragon Corps appeared and saved us. Jason embarrassed himself by trying to fight them and we were brought to Hospital Town, where we have remained under the care of Babamon, I just hope she is alright. From the window, we’ve seen the town being attacked and demolished by Blues and Skull’s forces. We were told to stay here, but, we can’t do nothing’ Lydia pleaded. Dominic shook his head. ‘So you should, the battlefield is no place for a little girl and boy. Once this is over, you two are going to be sent back to the human world’ Dominic replied and left. Lydia screamed and threw a doll at the door, it squeak and fell. Jason picked it up and handed it to her. ‘Thank you, but, we can’t do nothing Jason, we’re fighting, whether Dominic wants us to or not’ she said darkly. Two Digimon entered the room and approached them; they were a brown coloured bunny and a blue beetle. ‘Miss Lydia, Master Jason, we’re here to take you to safety’ the bunny said. ‘Lopmon, KoKabuterimon, very good timing. We have new orders, and that involves getting into the action. We’re joining the battle’ Lydia said with a smile. ‘But, we can’t fight’ Ko quivered and hid behind Lop. ‘That doesn’t matter. My brother is going into the battle with a teddy bear by his side. If he can fight, so can you’ Lydia replied and dragged Lop off. Jason shrugged and grabbed Ko, who didn’t resist. Demi and BK were hovering over the city, watching the carnage when Steph caught up with them. ‘Miss Dynamite Sexy Mayor, thank the lord you’ve come’ BK said sarcastically. ‘I should say the same to you guys, but, why don’t you make yourselves useful? Demi, BK, I need you on the front lines to help repel the attacking forces, they’re champion and rookies, so it won’t be a trouble for you if you Digivolve, now hop to it’ Steph ordered. They saluted and flew off to the front lines. They quickly land and make their presence known by knocking back the attacking waves. Kevin catches site of this and flies over there on Electro. ‘This is my fight, why don’t you go deal with another breach?’ Kevin asked in annoyance. ‘Pipe down Mary, we’re doing our job’ BK replied in similar annoyance and blasted a Hyogamon. ‘Yeah, our job is to fight on the front lines, which is what we are doing’ Demi added and guarded an attack from a Firamon. Kevin just looked away as Electro flew to a different point. They ignored him and got into a fighting stance, only to have the enemies retreat before they could counter. ‘Aww man, the party is over’ BK moaned. They were wrong, of course as two large spheres crash down and explode, scattering the defenders, not to mention Demi and BK. They groan as they get up, only to spot a blue light coming through the dirt. ‘I’m Mr. white blizzard, I’m Mr. snow. I’m Mr. icicle, I’m Mr. ten below. They call me Blue Meras, where I go, is laid to waste with snow, ha ha, I’m too much’ the figure sang. Another blue light broke through as well, but its voice was deeper and more mechanical. ‘I’m Mr. blue magma, I’m Mr. sun. I’m Mr. heat blister; I’m Mr. hundred and one. They call me Skull Meras, whenever I fight, I do it with incredible might, ha ha, I’m too much’ it sang. The dust immediately blew away to reveal to fire beings, one was dark blue and completely made of fire, whilst the other was grey with burning blue chains. Demi and BK were dumbfounded by this. ‘So, who are you guys?’ Demi asked, scratching his head. Blues and Skull did the anime fall. ‘We just told you’ Skull roared. ‘you told us you’re Mr. a whole lotta things, so, which is it?’ BK asked. The duo got into better positions. ‘He’s Blues’ Skull said. ‘He’s Skull’ Blues added. ‘And we’re the Meras Bros’ they said, doing Ginyu like fighting positions. ‘Okay, so you’re gay, we can run with that’ Demi said. ‘Yeah, never fought a gay guy before. Just don’t moan to much as we bash your innards’ BK said smugly. Skull roared and flung his chain at them, catching them both and flinging them fifty feet away. ‘Gay guys hit very hard’ BK said. ‘Course, most of the muscle men are gay, usually’ Demi replied. ‘Had enough?’ Blues asked. ‘No they have not’ a voice shouted. The Meras Bros looked for the voice. Lydia and Jason had been plotting, well, Lydia had in a hidden alleyway. ‘We need to find Blues and Skull, and take them out’ Lydia said. ‘But how, you are young humans, you can’t harm them, and we’re rookies, we can barely scratch an ultimate Digimon, let alone two’ Ko countered. ‘Then we’ll make do with what we have’ Lydia replied. ‘Who are you two?’ Steph asked loudly. They all looked to the opening to see Steph walking towards them with Mach at the entrance. ‘None of your business’ Lydia said. ‘I see, well, you appear to be human, what is your name?’ Steph asked with slight malice in her voice. ‘I am Lydia Jager, who the hell are you?’ Lydia asked. Steph just stared at this sweet looking girl. ‘You’re the sister of that psychopath?’ Steph asked incredulously. Lydia softened a little from this. ‘You know Dominic?’ she asked. ‘Yes, he is an, acquaintance of mine, but he never mentioned a sister’. ‘I doubt he would’ve mentioned me, he hates me’ Lydia said in anger. ‘I doubt that he would hate you, but, it is good that you have your own partners, just, hold on for a moment’ Steph said and walked off. She teleports to the Mayoral office and claims a medium box from the desk and she warps back to them. Steph eagerly holds the box open to reveal a black and a white Digivice. This will give you the power to evolve your partners, use them wisely’ Steph warned and left, hopping onto Mach and leaving, leaving the children perplexed. ‘It would seem that you guys can help us after all’ Jason said. The Digimon backed into the alley, but stopped at the wall. They both took the others hand and stood forward. ‘We’re here to help’ Lopmon said bravely. Lydia hugged the bunny happily. ‘Lopmon, you are the best, now come on, we have some goofballs to kick’ Lydia said and they ran off, only to find some hooded men fighting Blues and Skull. ‘Had enough?’ Blues shouted. ‘No they have not’ Lydia said. The Fire Digimon look at this small group and laugh. ‘You think those puneymons can beat us?’ Skull laughed. Lydia and Jason raise their hands. ‘YES! DIGIVOLVE!’ they both shouted. Their partners surround themselves in a data sphere, only to shatter to reveal their new forms. ‘BladeKuwagamon’ a flying sword shouted. ‘Turuiemon’ the purple bunny shouted. Lydia high fives Jason and they face Blues and Skull. ‘You can’t win now, give up’ Lydia. ‘Yeah, you can’t win against us’ Turuiemon boasted. ‘We shall see’ Blade said and rested on Turuie’s arm, becoming an arm mounted blade. ‘Awww yeah’ Turuie said and dashed at them both very quickly. ‘Gauntlet Spark Blade’ they shouted together, causing Blade to glow blue. Dominic catches up with Charlie, who was shepherding the last of the survivors into the hospital. ‘Charlie, we need to get the front lines, I heard that Blues and Skull finally appeared’ Dominic reported. Vixen growled loudly and launched herself straight towards the front lines. ‘Damnit, well come on then, if you’re so desperate to get to the front lines’ Charlie shouted, chasing after Vixen. Dominic sighs in annoyance and motions for Astos to follow. He manages to outrace and beat Charlie to the lines, where he sees the weirdest sight. ‘A bunny with a laser sword, fighting two fireballs. Now I have seen everything’ he said. ‘Have you seen a man eat his own pooh?’ Jason asked. Dominic glares at Lydia and Jason. ‘I told you to stay at the hospital’ he growls. ‘Hey, don’t give us that. We have Digimon partners as well, and Digivices’ Lydia replied and showed him her black one. ‘You got one too? And it’s a better colour’ Dominic gasps, then shrugs. ‘So where are your supposed partners then?’ he asked. Lydia just points at Turuiemon, who managed to dodge another attack. ‘You own the bunny, then what do you have Jason?’ ‘That laser sword thing is my partner, BladeKuwagamon’ Jason said proudly. This pride dies as the Turuie is attacked and blasted into a wall. Dominic just laughs. ‘Whatever, but now see a real monster, Astamon, attack!’ he ordered. Astos prepares his gun, but suddenly someone shouted stop. They all turn to see Vixen hovering over them all. ‘Blues. Skull. I hereby charge you of murder, your sentence, is death’ she said venomously. ‘You’re going to stop us?’ Skull asked. ‘Yes, I am Vixen, daughter of your victims, and their blade of vengeance, prepare to die’ Vixen replied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 Well i guessed completely wrong but i'd like to see if Jason can control his digimon when he's a mega. Hope Vixen can beat Blues and Skulls or her avengence will be in vain. Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 blues and skull are the next villains, they won't be beaten too soon, especially since they cover the others weakness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 good point. anyway, how many more characters do you need for this fic seeing as you've still got the application form still on the first page? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 i felt that anyone could add, ocurse, i would like some evil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 i'll think up one later and pm you it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 you odn't have too, i was just syaing, still, i liked the turuie/blade augment, it is helpful tot hink that blade is a living weapon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 30, 2009 Report Share Posted April 30, 2009 i just can't believe that it's Jason has got it as it's Mega is TyrantKabuterimon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 what is wrong with that? you seem to forget what keras and phasco become, not to mention thta Lydia has a celestial digimon as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 True but i think they will probably have more of a chance of controlling theirs compared to Jason. EDIT: Which colours have been taken for digivices of the characters because when i look at previous chapters i found that Steph and Dom have both got theirs as purple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 they do..................? oh, well, something like this: Steph has yellow, Charlie has red, Aban has blue, Dom has purple, Lydia has black, Kev has black and gold, Jason has white and Drake has twin gold Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 i was expecting Steph's to be pink because of couple of sentences in chapter 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 she's not a valley girl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 here the two sentences why i thought it was actually a pink digivice she wore. "with her device draws a circle in the air (the line is pink) and places the device in the centre"and"They all draw the same circle (each colour according to their digivice)." thats why i thought it was pink because if they drew a circle according to their digivice Steph's should be yellow then instead of pink. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Awesome Chapter 17! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 How's your computer now Kuja? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Well, I'm at my dad's place over the weekend, so I got Internet. But after that, I still have to wait for my own internet modem to get fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 damn, thats not good. hope it's fixed soon so you can continue with your fics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 Yeah, I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 well right now i've just got to wait for response from Broken to see if he accepts a character idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 i'lll consider her Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted May 1, 2009 Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 here the two sentences why i thought it was actually a pink digivice she wore. "with her device draws a circle in the air (the line is pink) and places the device in the centre"and"They all draw the same circle (each colour according to their digivice)." thats why i thought it was pink because if they drew a circle according to their digivice Steph's should be yellow then instead of pink. and what about this. my reason why i thought Steph's digivice was pink. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted May 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2009 i edited, still, consider naomi accepted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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