The Warden Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 ...................you say your comments out loud?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 not all the time. this was just a rare moment when i say my comment out loud. EDIT: I forgot to mention that I love the part before my 2 characters merge when Kevin has a crimson aura surround his body, crimson eyes and that his digivice turns Black with Gold trim,I like that colour combination. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 hey brokenheart what is the song you put for my character theme because I don't like it to be honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 I like the black with gold trim colouration Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 DRAKE HAS ESCAPED!! Now things get REALLY interesting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 yes they will, and i assume everyone knows hwo arcadia is because they arne't mentioning him.....or her, i don't really know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 I like the black with gold trim colouration I wish the digivice stayed the colour to be honest. I agree with you kuja but Kevin beat his mega digimon so there isn't much for him to worry about.8) EDIT: well it is a bit obvious who arcadia is, brokenheart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 fine, it is ogudamon, happy now? i went and spoiled the last bad guy and it DID stay that colour Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 oh really?my bad i was just under the impression that it changed back to green after, sorry. EDIT: ??? to be honest now i thought it was more likely to be Arkadimon because of the similarity in the names Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 D: Kevin godmodded big time XD Like the chapter though. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Kevin might have godmodded but he still has one major weakness which the other guys don't so it I think it balanced it out a bit. I do slightly agree with your comment fenrir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 The whole, "lolwut an Ultimate just wooped a mega when 4 other couldn't." That part. Weakness? Feels pain his Digimon feels? That's not a weakness. It's a major strength. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 no, his major weakness is if the circle ruin thing is destroyed, Magnetmon will be destroyed. EDIT: when will the next chapter be up BrokenHeart? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Now, and, let me explain. Werewolfdramon wasn't beaten, just caught off guard. If he was beaten, he wouldn't have been able to fly away or outrace Electromagnetismon, he was barely hurt by that throw. The Soul Fusion was because Electro is, how you say, Kevin's second body. Remember, Magnet was made of half of Kevin's soul, so, logically, he could fuse into the body to complete the soul and unlock full power. Oh yeah, I added to the characters section and give Arcadia and Kev new themes. [spoiler=Chapter 16: Sibling Rivalry] Steph was sitting at Jiji’s desk. She had no choice, as, it was stated by Jiji’s will that she was to become the next mayor of the Holy City. Gaomon was standing by her side in a secret agent tuxedo with sunglasses; he was watching her closely, barely keeping his own emotions. Steph herself was staring a photo; it was her when she and Drake were younger, they looked so happy. She tosses it and disgust and stands up. She was wearing a dress suit herself, with short skirt and top. Gaomon runs to her side. ‘Where to ma’am?’ he asked. Steph glares at him. ‘Stop that Gaomon; this is no time for jokes. We have to locate and capture Drake before he can bring anymore harm to this world. Now that Jiji is gone, it falls to me to capture him. I may not be a mega level Digimon, but I still care this world. The damage he could cause with Jogress and those golden Digivices is immense, I don’t even want to imagine the pain War and Ex are going through, nor experience the dark thoughts of Drake. We must end this now, before I can’t do anything’ Steph said strongly. ‘Those are true words of strength Miss Mayor’ Dominic mocked as he and the rest of the group assembled. ‘Why are you guys here? I thought you had better things to do then see the Mayor’ she said. ‘Well, we did, but then, something interesting came up. You see, Vixen and Keras were sparing, when she accidentally impaled him with a Diamond Storm attack. Then, Demi comes in and does this weird magic and suddenly Keras is all better. We asked him what that was, and he replied that it was White Magic called Cure, we asked him what else he could do, but, oh, Demi, you tell her’ Aban said in annoyance. ‘Well, I can cast White Magic, which does things so as heal or remove things like poison. Then I realized that my knowledge of White Magic is limited to my level, so, I realized that, maybe if I were an ultimate, my knowledge might be able to bring Jiji back’ Demi explained. ‘No point, Jiji is dead Demi’ Steph replied. ‘Only in mind and soul, remember, when a Digimon is dead, they are resurrected as a Digi-egg, but Jiji’s body is still there. I don’t think Drake had enough strength to fully kill Jiji, therefore, I think I can revive Jiji’ Demi said. Steph looked at him, then at herself and the office she was in. ‘I think I can see the logic, but, we’ll need to preserve his body. The Holy City doesn’t have the means, but Hospital Town does’ she said. ‘Sounds nice’ Aban said dreamily. Steph picks up the phone on her desk and dials a number. ‘I would like ElDradimon to be directed to Hospital Town, it is of course a matter of life and death’ she said into the speaker. A voice was heard lightly and the whole city rocked. ‘What was that?’ Vixen asked. ‘An express ticket to Hospital Town’ Steph answered. Drake had set up a small camp at a hidden cave at a spring in Argos Forest. He was sitting by the small fire he had built and was nursing a damaged arm. ‘I can’t believe that someone like Stephanie could not only pressure me, but she also hurt me. I see that the years here have made her stronger, but with Jogress, the genocide can commence’ Drake thought to himself. Ex and War were sitting in the nearby spring and were healing from the last battle. ‘It would seem that that robot is nothing to be sniffed back’ War said. ‘Yes, a bugger of a thing, it just got lucky because we had never seen a human and a Digimon fuse, next time, he won’t be so lucky’ Ex added, pounding his fist into his other hand. ‘This water is great though, the dirt of all those years locked away is finally falling off. But Master Drake, his sister cut him deep. The scars on him cannot be washed off; I cannot imagine the pain it would be to have your own sister disown you like that’ War added and splashed his face. ‘Yes, that it true, but, she had good reason. I didn’t like attacking Gaomon like that. He is a nice bloke, he truly is, and Jiji, well, he visited once a year for therapy and a check-up. And Drake just ran him through the heart; it pains me to see that. But he is out master, he beat us both and we must serve him, that was the deal, right mate?’ Ex said to War. ‘Right back at you mate. Actually, I have to add that the Jogress state is interesting isn’t it?’ War added with a confused look. ‘Yeah, too right. The way it felt, I could feel my own mind, and yet, we thought separately, it is bloody strange how one head had two separate trains of thought. Now, we best get something to eat’ Ex said and got out of the spring. War followed him after drying off and putting on his underwear and jeans. ‘I think I saw some fruit trees by the river’ War shouted. Drake was still alone, but then, light laughter is heard and the phantom creature appears again. ‘Well, it would seem that you hold true to your word after all’ Arcadia said. Drake just snorted and stared at him. ‘You’re one to talk, now spill it, why did you want me to obtain these Digivices? I don’t care for knowing why you wanted Jijimon dead, but why?’ Drake asked in anger. ‘It is your destiny to have them. You are one of the few humans who possess two Digimon partners, more so that you are the only one that can successfully initiate Jogress’ Arcadia explained. Drake just snorted again and rested his arm. ‘I understand the pain you feel. I would find it difficult to betray my only living relative, but, know that she will forgive you’ Arcadia said kindly. Drake looked at him in fury. ‘FORGIVE ME!? FORGIVE ME!? I DON’T THINK YOU’VE SEEN WHAT I HAVE DONE! I’ve betrayed the only one that ever cared for me. She denied me right to my face, something no one could truly understand. You understand nothing about me’ Drake shouted at Arcadia. ‘I understand your pain quite well. Tell me, how would you feel if you were the incarnation of all sins? I am bound to this world, being nothing but a shadow. Cursed by the Dark Council’ Arcadia replied. ‘I thought you said you worked for the Dark Council’ Drake said. ‘I only said that for the security cameras. I wish to bring any misery to the council. Their sins have racked me for centuries, leaving me nothing but a shadow. I chose you Drake, because, you are the only one who could combat them. Your darkness parallels them, you can use that. You will become a hero’ Arcadia preached. Drake just looked away. ‘I don’t think I could ever become that. If I destroy that council, what then? I don’t suppose that you realize that I am a murderer, no; scratch that, I AM murder. Once the council is finished, I would continue killing, until every f**king Digimon is dead’ Drake spat. Arcadia just chuckled. ‘I wouldn’t think so; you will have a very different mind set once you truly see the light’ Arcadia told him and vanished. Drake just laughed and put another log on the fire. ‘You know, I cannot believe that this giant turtle can go four hundred miles and hour’ Aban remarked. ‘When he moves, he does. ElDradimon is a good friend of Jiji; he wouldn’t want to see him die. Of course, ElDradimon would have to rest a while, which is good, as we have many wounded Digimon still’ Gaomon explained, his little tie flowing in the breeze. ‘It would be nice to see other Digimon, the Holy City is so tiring, right honey’ Vixen asked to Charlie. He smiled at her. ‘Of course, who knows, we might settle at Hospital Town’ Charlie said and smiled. Vixen giggled and gave Charlie a small peck, causing Aban to gag. ‘I wonder though, what if more humans are found at Hospital Town?’ Demi thought. ‘I doubt it; the Dark Council maintains any connection between the worlds, if anyone was to get in, they would know’ Dominic said. ‘How do you know that?’ Keras asked. ‘Because I went through Jiji’s documents’ Dominic replied. ‘Are there no secrets anymore?’ Steph asked. ‘No, not really, just like the secret that Drake is a total douche, of course, that isn’t too much of a secret anymore’ Dominic replied with a laugh. Steph growled loudly and punched him in the face, causing him to tumble to the ground. ‘Too much Dominic, the girl is troubled’ Charlie said to him and helped him up. ‘We have arrived, Gaomon, go to the Medical tent and alert Lucky and Lucy to prepare all the wounded for departure’ Steph ordered. Gaomon saluted and ran off. Steph didn’t turn as she addressed the others. ‘I need you guys to secure the city from any form of attacks, that includes attacks on the Holy City’ she them bluntly. Charlie nodded and began to shepherd the others away, except Kevin and Magnetmon. Kevin seemed uncomfortable as he came up behind her and gave her a quick hug. She was caught by surprise by this and blushed as he ran off in shame. She gave a quick smile and used a function on her Digivice to warp to the hospital. ‘That is a sad tale young Mayor. Our beds are always open, and we will do our best to preserve Jijimon’s body’ the head nurse said to Steph. ‘Thank you Baba, I am sure he wouldn’t mind to be in your capable hands’ Steph said, she was still blushing from Kev’s sneak attack. Baba cackled slightly. ‘It would seem that Cupidmon has struck you dead on. But, I hope that you don’t have too many injured, as our wounded are increasing everyday’ Baba reported. ‘What, how?’ Steph asked quickly. ‘We’re being attacked constantly by the Dark Council in their attempts to capture our city. Most of our soldiers are falling. The only warriors still surviving are our Dragon Corps’ Baba added. ‘The Dragon Corps?’ Steph asked. ‘They consist of our five resident dragons. WarGrowlmon, AeroVeedramon, Cyberdramon, Coredramon blue and Coredramon green. But, they are weakening after every attack. They soon won’t have the energy to repel the invaders’ Baba replied sadly. ‘Hey Steph, our wounded have been brought to the hospital, what’s the deal though? Some of the buildings have been damaged’ Vixen said, coming in with a glass of water. ‘The deal is that Hospital Town is under constant attack by the Dark Army. Our forces are slowly weakening though’ Baba said. ‘Which members are attacking the city?’ Steph asked. ‘Blues and Skull’ Baba said ominously. The sound of a glass shattering was heard as Vixen was staring at Baba with crazed eyes. ‘Blues and Skull?! They will rue the day that they ever picked on the weak. It would seem a fortune teller and diviner were not enough, now it would seem that they want to tae down the hospitals too, I will not let this happen’ Vixen said coldly and left, ignoring her bleeding paw. ‘Vixen’s family was murdered by Blues and Skull, she vowed to end them in any way she could’ Steph explained. Baba nodded and rushed out as a small beeper went off. Steph followed her out. Charlie and Dominic were wheeling Jiji too the cryogenesis room when shouting was heard. ‘I tell you what to do Jason. I know Baba said for us to stay here, but she didn’t state where here was, now did she?’ a familiar voice shouted. Dominic stopped and looked for where the sound was coming from. He opened a door to a room where a girl and boy were standing. They looked thirteen and fourteen. ‘Lydia?’ Dominic asked. The girl turns to glare at Dominic, but then melts. ‘Dominic?’ she asked in return. They just stood staring at each other. Charlie didn’t stop for Dominic and took him to the room, where Baba and Steph were waiting for him. ‘Very good, now, We must be quick, time is of the essence’ Baba warned. Charlie nodded and with the help of some of the staff, lowered him gently into a pod, in which he was sealed into. ‘Now, you have ample time to find a way to revive Jiji, this baby will keep Jiji fresh for eighty years’ one of the staff (a Piddomon) said proudly. ‘With the way we’re going, I won’t live that long’ Steph replied. This may have proved true as a large explosion was heard from outside causing the whole hospital to rock. ‘The hospital is under attack, alert the forces, we cannot allow them entry’ Baba ordered. The Piddomon staff nodded and flew out of the window. ‘Mayor, you’d best find cover as well’ Baba warned. ‘No, I am going to fight as well, my partner needs me’ Steph replied and left. Baba just watched. ‘That girl has a strong heart, but dark thoughts plague her mind’. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 I foresee...THAT NEXT CHAPTER WILL KICK ASS!!! Plus that this one was great too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 This chapter was Badass. Waaaaaaaaaay to badass. I do not understand the Dominic part. O_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 it's not that badass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 It was that badass. I have a badass radar, that goes from a scale of 1-10. It was a 9. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 okay, and seriously, you don't get the lydia and dominic thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 VERY NICE CHAPTER BROKENHEART but I hope there will be an explaination in a another chapter why Kevin hugged Steph. Also I don't really like the song chose for his character theme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 No I don't. I probably never will. X_X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Does Lydia and Jason have digimon partners or not? EDIT: also i've noticed the pic of the Digivice isn't showing up but when i check what one it was i look for a better pic of it. I hope this one is ok.This is the link I got it off:http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/digimon/images/f/fb/Digivice_01.jpg No I don't. I probably never will. X_X You have checked the Character list haven't you Fenrir? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Yes I've checked it. I just don't understand what this has to do with Dom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Lydia is Dom's sister. how do you not understand that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 When did that happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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