The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 Name: Digimon: The Children from MysidiaLength: 66, 910 Words, 31 ChaptersLink: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-111414.htmlActivity: At least 2 chapters a week, depending on how busy I am, maybe 3 or 1.Example: Provide a short example from any chapter of the story.[spoiler=Exert from the first Chapter] [align=center]‘Twin seeds of Dark & Light.From Dark World plucked.Destined for destruction,They exist never and forever.Until purity is called,To end their Endeavour’.~Ancient Prophecy of the Digi-World, as foreseen by Jijimon.[/align] ‘Joyous and bouncy music is heard as balloons and streamers batter against a light wind. Children laughing whilst eating cotton candy or licking ice creams. The circus is a joyous thing, childhood memories, clowns…bearded ladies sometimes. It is the stuff of sugar, dreams and the occasional freak show. But, one circus in particular, the Zoominwyre Rosvelt circus is home to two very special children, with a destructive destiny ahead. Little do they know this (as any destiny goes), but they will soon learn that they’re not alone in their world, or the other. What’s the other world? The Digital World, where creatures called Digimon (Di-gi-mon – Digi short for Digital, Mon short for Monster. Full name: Digital Monster) live and exist in harmony and dystopia. Evil exists in the darkest corners, and they seek these children for their own evil purposes. As anyone would say, how cliché.’ The Top Hat bigtent was the pride of the circus ringmaster Theodore Rosvelt. It could house all their acts and many more. He looked as all the spectators began piling in for the acts. He straightens his little bow tie and then walks out to face his audience. He walked around stools and other props to face them; he pulled out his speaker cone and placed it to his smiling lips. ‘Ladies. Gentlemen. Children of all ages. I welcome you to the Zoominwyre Circus. We have some great acts to show, and believe me, they’re ready to go, so, let’s bring out our first act, the clowns’ he said, his voice amplified by the cone to fill the tent. The audience cheered loudly as a bunch of men and women in funny outfits in baggy pants (not including Jumbo the Clown), with their horns, seltzer bottles and red noses. They began honking wildly whilst the assistants brought out a large cart filled with pies. About You - Forum Time: 04-13-08About You - Forum Activity: 2679 (Not that it matters really) I want to add that I don't care if I'm accepted or not really but, there is a sexual scene in chapter 13, which has been warned and spoilered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 BrokenHeart15, not accepted. Not only because of that scene, that should not belong on this forum regardless of how many spoilers you put it in, but also because of bad dialog formatting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted June 12, 2009 Report Share Posted June 12, 2009 I understand, don't bother adding me to the waiting list, as I won't bother reapplying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I know Wild West Bob is FAR from application, but about the 500 post rule... the story is written by both ME and KENDO FISH. Since there are two authors, will the rule only apply to the one applying for the application? Or can both of us have 250 posts each? How should this rule be enforced here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 The rule applies to the owner of the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Okay, and thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 Yes, now I'm finally able to apply. And this story is co-written by my sister, Kendo Fish, and about to enter its first major story arc. It's a comedy/parody, if you were wondering about the un-seriousness of it all. Name: Wild West Bob: A Yu-Gi-Oh! SagaLength: 13 Chapters right now.Link: Wild West Bob: A Yu-Gi-Oh SagaActivity: It's notable for being updated every week on a weekend, unless something happens in our personal lives to disrupt the schedule.Example: [spoiler=A Few Paragraphs]“I’ll tune my Level Two Magma Dragon to my Level Eight Horus.” The Tuner stupidly flew into Horus and exploded! The burning wreckage turned into three weird orbs that turned into three weird rings that surrounded Horus! Horus began fading away at a new shape took form. Drake recited a Synchro haiku!”Um, some stuff happens.And, uh, more things happen too.Erm, do some stuff now,~TRIDENT DRAGON.” Upon Drake’s retarded request, a huge three-headed infernal dragon stood at-the-ready.“WROOOOOOOOOOOOOR!!” the heads roared!“Holy crappolly! That freak’s big!” Bob yelped.“And the turn it’s summoned I can discard up to two cards on my side of the field and he can attack up to two more times. I’ll discard my Level Six and one of my Trap Cards.” The dragon simply ate up Horus Level Six and the Dragon’s Bead card.“GOBGOBGOBGOBGOB!!” It gobbled loudly with its mouths full!“Now Trident Dragon, use Three-Head Attack on his face downs.” The dragon thrust its head at a hidden monster Bob controlled.“YES!! You fell for it!” Bob pointed skyward in an awesome fashion! “Legendary Jujitsu Master, get rid of him for good!” Yes, the pirate martial artist appeared and grasped the nose of the dragon! “Grrr….AAAAAAH!!” He PICKED UP THE ENTIRE DRAGON AND HELD IT OVER HIS HEAD.“NO WAAAAAAY,” Drake said. “IT CAN’T BEEEEEE.”“YES WAY!! When you attack my Legendary Jujitsu Master, the attacker is sent back on top of the deck! In your case, the Fusion Deck… I mean Synchro Deck!”“No, it’s just called the Extra Deck now.”“Thanks,” Bob thanked. “PIRATE TOOOOOOOSS!!”“Urrrrgh…” The Jujitsu Master was starting to fall apart due to the intense weight of the dragon. “YAH!” He finally threw the dragon away, into outer space and out of sight forever.“Rawr! RAWR! RAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH…” The dragon left the atmosphere with a sparkle. Then the pirate crumbled into dust.“Farewell, Pirate Martial Artist Man.” Bob quietly saluted him.”Yargh,” “Well, Armed Dragon, attack his other monster!”Drake ordered! “Meteor Ten!”“RAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!” Armed Dragon held his arms into the air and the Earth began shaking.“Well, this oughta be good,” D. D. Dude laughed.“What in Sam Hill is goin’ on now?” Bob asked. Ten flaming meteors fell from the sky, all aimed at Bob’s last monster.“Die, face-down monster, die,” Drake ordered.“No.” The card flipped up and held up the first of the meteors falling upon him. Then the others began piling up on each other. In the end, he was holding up every last meteor falling upon him. THE SECOND LEGENDARY JUJITSU MASTER HE’D SET THREW ALL OF THEM AT ONCE AT ARMED DRAGON LEVEL TEN, PUSHING HIM BACK ON TOP OF THE DECK.“Noooooooo, my poweeeeeeers!” it roared, somehow in English.“M-m-my Dragon monsters!” Drake exclaimed! “You set TWO of the same monster?! That should have made it even less awesome, but it didn’t!”“AND your field is totally open now!” Bob noted!“I… end my turn?”“And I activate my Trap card, Call of the Haunted! Again!” His Wandering Mummy appeared once more, bent on revenge. “Attack!”“Rar,” it growled, throwing its arm at Drake!“No, I lost.” (Drake: 0 Life Points. GAME OVER) About You - Forum Time: March 24th, '09.About You - Forum Activity: FIVE HUNDRED EXACTLY. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 I'm waiting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Name - Yugioh D.A.I. Length - 9 Chapters (at this Time)Link - http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-158753.htmlActivity - Usually a chapter each week two chapters if I get time.Example:[spoiler=Example]---------At the classroom-------- "Ok students in todays lesson you will be taught by Professor Dark." Elmsly told the students as Neo walked in. "Please call me Neo or if you students would prefer Mr.Dark." Neo said. "How about we call you Mr.Loser!!" Blake said and everybody in class laughed but Tom. "You!!! Tom Matrix you think your a clown eh?" Neo said blaming Tom for the insult. "But Mr.Dark it wasnt me it was..." But before Tom could finish his sentence. "A Drunk! Yep a Drunk and a liar but mostly a liar I know you called me Mr.Loser Tom!" Neo said as if he thought it was funny. "Tom's a drunk? Hey where's the booze?" Someone in the class said. "I'm not a drunk you moron! How'd they even accept you into the Academy your an idiot!" Tom replied to the person. "Enough to teach you some manners I will make you duel Blake after class at the Duel Field!" Neo said and after awhile class was finished. ------At the Duel Field------- "And now for your punishment & my revenge you shall duel Blake right here right now!" Neo said as the duel was about to begin. "You ready for this noob?" Blake insulted Tom. "LETS DUEL!!" They both shouted. "Yea go Blake you can beat that there Tom who beat that there Neo in Chapter 3" Someone in the crowd shouted. "Who the hell are you?" Blake asked the person but got no answer. "I'll go first draw!!! Now i'll Summon my old favourite Silent Swordsman LV 3 in attack mode. Then i'll set 2 cards face-down your move Blake!" Tom send ending his turn. "Wow that was an ok move." Said a girls voice as she sat next to Albus & Tyke. "Dibs" Albus said to Tyke referring that he wanted that girl. "Hey no fair I said shotgun!" Tyke replied. "Too bad I said it 1st haha." Albus told Tyke. "My move now i'll set 2 cards face-down and summon Masked Dragon now attack his monster!" Blake said as he made his move. "I activate my Trap Negate Attack." Tom replied. "You got lucky again I'll end my turn." "Hi my name's Ruby Kryst what's yours?" Ruby asked Tyke. "Uh my name's Tyke Natrui nice to meet you." Tyke replied while blushing. "So is that your friend dueling?" Ruby asked Tyke. "Who Tom? Oh yea he's my friend all right." Tyke replied. "Hey do you guys mind? I'm trying to watch teenagers play a childrens card game!" Albus rudely interupted. "Ok draw!! Now i'll active Swordsman's Effect to bring out Silent Swordsman LV 5!" Just then the swordsman arised from his card frame and slahed his sword around to show that he was very skilled. "Oh you again." Blake said. "Yep and now I summon Spell Striker now Swordsman attack his monster!" Tom commanded his monster. "I activate Mirror Force to destroy both of your monsters!" Blake said interupting Swordsmans attack. "Gah not again!" Tom replied to the counter. "I guess i'll end my turn." "Yes, Yes now finish him Blake!" Neo told Blake. "Sure I will now my turn and you ran out of luck I activate Future Fusion you should no what i will do next i'll dump 5 Dragon monsters to my Graveyard. Then I'll Activate Dragons Mirror to bring out FHD!!!" "Oh No." Tom Said. "Oh No." Albus said. "Oh No." Tyke said. "Oh God yes!!!" Neo said. "Now my Dragon lay waist to his Life Points!" Blake commanded his dragon to attack "Now I activate my Mirror Force!" Tom countered. "Bu-bu but that was my move!" Blake complained. "Yes but because I'm the main character I.." "Nobody cares that your the main character! you used that joke in chapter 3 just stop it!" Blake inturrupted. "That was low..." Tom replied. "Not as low as a limbo stick!" Neo shouted "Fine I guess I'll just do this I Summon Marauding Captain use it's effect to Special Summon Silent Magician LV 4, activate Heavy Storm to clear the field, play LV up Special Summon Silent Magician LV 8 and attack you directly with my monsters and win!" Tom said and won the duel. "Damn it!!!" Blake said angrily. "Never underestimate the main character in any series!" Tom said and walked off to the dorm with Albus & Tyke. About You - Forum Time: November 8 2008About You - Forum Activity: 710 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Um I hate to point out stupidity by a super mod but the first post doesn't even have the accepted stories listed. Instead it shows the UNACCEPTED ones. Tell me, what is the point of displaying prominent works if you have to search the whole thread to see which ones were accepted. Especially when you only need to look at the first page to see the ones who were not that great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted October 26, 2009 Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 Um I hate to point out stupidity by a super mod but the first post doesn't even have the accepted stories listed. Instead it shows the UNACCEPTED ones. Tell me' date=' what is the point of displaying prominent works if you have to search the whole thread to see which ones were accepted. Especially when you only need to look at the first page to see the ones who were not that great.[/quote'] There are no current accepted works. :/ The only one we had was Kale's, and his went inactive for too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Is my fanfic Yugioh DAI accepted? Its up to 10 chapters now and I haven't heard from you guys saying if its accepted or not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 There are no current accepted works. :/ The only one we had was Kale's' date=' and his went inactive for too long.[/quote'] I suggested this to Umbra but I'll suggest it here as well.*goes to find MSN convo*(6:50 PM) Sam: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-111319.html are you still doing this? If not, I think an index of the 'best' Fan-Fics on YCM would be a better idea.(6:51 PM) Charlie: I dunno about that one, really.(6:52 PM) Sam: Hmm? Elaborate, please?(6:52 PM) Charlie: Not sure what to do with the "Featured Fanfics" and all.An index would be fine, I guess.(6:54 PM) Sam: Mhmm. Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SebastiaanZ Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 I´d like to apply, but I have a cancelled project and a new upcoming fanfic project. Can you post it from somewhere else? Otherwise I would have to first make a thread down here, which will be a lot of work considering the old fanfic has been running for 2 years and 90 chapters and is highly considered to be one of the better fanfics on other boards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 I´d like to apply' date=' but I have a cancelled project and a new upcoming fanfic project. Can you post it from somewhere else? Otherwise I would have to first make a thread down here, which will be a lot of work considering the old fanfic has been running for 2 years and 90 chapters and is highly considered to be one of the better fanfics on other boards.[/quote'] Cross-posting would be considered advertising, even if it's indirect. You'd have to post it on a new thread here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Name: Pain of PeaceLength: 5,084 words.Link: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-161752.htmlActivity: Once or twice a week, chapters are in dairy form and it is not long.Example: [spoiler=Example]Dear Diary,3 Mar 1919. Today I attended the funeral for Albert and Eduard. It was a sad, sad event. I was dressed formally, and in full black, as the proper respect for a funeral. It was a closed casket funeral, and Von Mises did not attend, although he was invited. They had left no will, however, with their deaths, I was virtually homeless. I recalled back to that night, where I had been so close with death, before I fainted, I recalled the promises I kept to various people. The people whose lives that I tried to change, the girl at Braudenberg, or the villagers at that small town. I didn't see them being fulfilled. My promise to right the wrongs in the war, I have not fulfilled them yet, perhaps the entire episode was gods way of telling me to keep to my task. After all, I've been doing arbitrage work. So, it was that day that I had realized, economics is for the people. Spending weeks at time, I devised a n economic system, I coined it Liberalism. Still, this system was imperfect, and much work is needed. Anyways, Von Mises agreed to teach me 'macroeconomics' the economy of an entire nation, the world, not just the basics of management, supply, and demand. I would sit in the library for hours at a time to read, whatever books it might have been. The German Ideology, Das Kapital, The Exchequer, The Wealth of Nations, The Road to Serfdom, etc. Trying to find the solution, the solution to why people are poor, why do countries go to war? Yet, at times, I would turn to Marx, I would be entranced by the ideas in "The Labor Theory of Value", only to have Von Mises snap at me in the end. 3 Months had went by, it was time to attend Albert and Eduard's funeral. Of course, respects were paid, but I did not say anything. I left, and when I returned to 'home', I packed my bags and prepared to leave, only to see my father. He asked me, with a very serious tone, "Why are you studying economics? A dismal science invented by Jews?". To this I had no good reply, he the posed another question, "Boy, you are 17 now, turning 18 in July, you should take responsibility and earn your keep through work, not through investing, or whatever you call it." I was furious. The idea of money making money could be explained, being Anti-Semitic I had always known. But, he had wore an red cloth over his arm, and on it, a cross, not an ordinary cross, a swastika. His idea that majority of financiers in Berlin were Jewish is correct, but it doesn't mean they cause it, or "betrayed" Germany at the end. Furious, I blurted out, "It's not like you made an honest day of work either! You sat in a church all day telling people miracles will happen while they do not!" My father was flaming hot now, and he tried to strike me, but I had enough, I grabbed arm and struck him square in the face. He was really mad now, "You are not my son. No son strikes his father!", he roared. He left in a hurry, but those were hollow threats. I had already made a decent amount of money from the Stock Market with my arbitrage technique, of course, as the allies sat down at Versailles, I knew these days may come to an end. About You - Forum Time: 2 Apr 2009About You - Forum Activity: 1642 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Just wondering, do Prolouges/Prefaces count as chapters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Is this thread dead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 I think so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Name: VibeLength: At this time, it has three chapters and a prologue.Link: Click here.Activity: Approximately a chapter per day, but this may change a little.[spoiler=[b]Example:[/b]]"Alexis, what's wrong?" asked Angela of her child, whom was crying in the corner. "The big bad wolf's gonna get me!" she cried. She wasn't easy to understand, but Angela could. The corner in which Alexis was looking at was completely empty. "No he isn't. Come on! I need to go to work!" yelled Angela. Alexis continued crying. Once again, Angela simply picked Alexis up and began walking towards her apartment door. She stopped when she felt something wet. "Did you go-" Angela started, then stopped. Her fingers were covered with blood. There, on Alexis' arm, was a claw mark. About You - Forum Time: June 28th, 2009.About You - Forum Activity: 2,272 including this post. This fan fic is very new, but has had all good reactions and a few people that are reading it actively. It's based partly off members of my family. I'm Robert, for that's my middle name. My niece is Alexis, and that's her middle name. Most people from my family here are named by their middle name, or what their middle name is close to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Name: Union of Justice Book 2 - Shattered Union; Rise Of the RegulantsLength: Prologue, 7 Chapters, and 1 Filler Chapter. All-in-all; 9 Chapters.Link: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-159941.htmlActivity: Either one Chapter a week, on one per month.Example:[spoiler=Taken from Chapter 6 - Espada Encounter][align=center]"Oh, you got some fighting spirit in you, don't you?" he said with a chuckle. "Too bad, I don't waste my time on weak, unskilled worms like you and that kitsune over there..." he pointed one of his bony fingers at Renamon. This seemed to tick Renamon off, as she rushed towards him and gave him a strong kick into his chest, but all he did was to twitch slightly in mere irritation. "What, is that all you got? Disappointing." he frowned yet again, and with a swipe of his hand, he merely slapped Renamon into a tree, as it crashed upon her impact with it. "RENAMON!" Rika cried out in desperation, and sighed in relief as Renamon stood up. Her gaze turned to the man, as she looked infuriated and worried about his power. To be able to hit someone that hard, it was impossible that this being was human. "W-What are you?! And why are you here?!" "Keh, I suppose I could spare you an answer..." the man smirked, and in an instant, he pulled out something from his back. A giant, axe-like weapon with two crescent-shaped blades connected to each others backs, the blades located on the inner circle. A looped chain was attached at the end of the long black handle, and seemed to be connected to his waist. Rika gasped at the size of his weapon. "I am Espada Nr. 5! Nnoitra Jiruga!" he opened his mouth and revealed his pointy tongue, revealing a tattoo of the number 5 on it, before pulling it back into his mouth. Renamon was now beside Rika again, ready for a fight. "Rika, let me take him down." she said confidently. "He only got a lucky shot that time, and it didn't even hurt. I can take him down." Rika was now hesitating. Nnoitra seemed stronger than what he had just demonstrated, and with the size and cruel shape of his weapon, one single mistake could lead to a fatal injury...or even death. But if Renamon was so confident in her abilities, could it mean that she could stand a chance against Nnoitra? She finally made up her mind, and pulled her Digivice. "Ok! Let's show him what a real fight is about!" she said determined, and Renamon nodded, coldly glaring at Nnoitra. He didn't seem the slightest intimidated, and just smirked on. "Keh, this will be interesting!" he smirked, and charged at Renamon with his axe swinging after her. Renamon made a quick move and dodged Nnoitra's swing, and prepared to punch his face. But Nnoitra had other plans, and yanked in the handle of his weapon, causing it to return towards him and Renamon, who had to back-flip in order ot dodge the inward-pointed blade. She hoped the blade would cut Nnoitra in half, but then, she saw in fear that the blade didn't even scratch Nnoitra, but instead seemed to grind along his body, a screeching sound occuring and sparks glimmering as the blade his him. Nnoitra smirked. "Oh, I should have mentioned; we Arrancar - as we are called - have enhanced iron skin, or as we call it, Hierro. There is no way any blade can cut me!" then he charged Renamon, grabbed her face, and pummeled her into the ground.[/align] About You - Forum Time: 06-08-2008, 09:24 AMAbout You - Forum Activity: 15,745 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Name: Fake Knights - the storyLength: 8 chaptersLink: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-172722.htmlActivity: 7 chapters per week minimum, rate may slightly decrease as time goes on.Example: A light mist surrounded the immense castle. A girl who appeared to be eighteen or so stumbled upon the castle. She slowly walked to the door, and gave it a slight push. The door opened with a drawn out creak, and the girl looked inside to find the castle deserted. She walked inside, her eyes taking in the surroundings. She was in a large room, like the ones parties or balls are held in. “Maybe this could be where…” she muttered to herself. The girl then saw there was a large door on the far side of the room. She walked toward it and tried opening it. The girl’s eyes widened as she saw a throne. It was made of gold with rims of silver. “This is it… I’ll finally be able to take them on from here… now I just need to find some help… I can’t build an army by myself…” the girl said, touching the chair softly. “Shi, shi. What are you doing around here, girl? Someone your age shouldn’t be by herself in a castle such as this…” The girl swiftly turned her head to the direction the voice had come from. About You - Forum Time: When did you join these forums? 05-30-2009About You - Forum Activity: What is your current post count? 3, 870 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 Name: Yu-Gi-Oh! Future Visions Length: Prologue + 8 ChaptersLink: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-157324.htmlActivity: Active Period: 1 Chapter per week / Passive period or Block: 1 Chapter per monthExample: [spoiler=Extract from Ch. 2: The main characters meet]She turned the radio off. Even tough she did not dislike Tom, she wasn’t in the mood. What had happened? She had lost consciousness the night before, and was now at home. Someone had brought her for sure. Then suddenly, the silence was broken. Footsteps. She listened carefully, and noticed they were coming out of her own living room. She quickly got up, jumped into her shoes and ran into the living room herself, just in time to see the front door closing. What should she do? She noticed two pillows lying at the end of her sofa. The person that had just left must’ve spent the night here. Without thinking, she ran back into her bedroom and put on her coat. She then dashed through the front door, and looked left and right. She saw a man disappearing behind the corner, and she ran behind him.“Wait!” she yelled, just before he could pass another corner.He turned around, looking at her in a puzzled expression.“I...- Did you...- Why...?” She was breathing very fast due to the short run. He put a hand onto her shoulder, and looked her in the eyes.He had great green eyes, and a sharp but friendly look on his face. His short brown hair had obviously not been combed for a few days. He was wearing a black jeans, and a dark T-shirt of which the text was barely readable. In his other hand, he was carrying a long black coat and a grey backpack.“I thought it was only logical to do. Who knows what would’ve happened to you?”He turned around and walked away, but she didn’t want him to leave so soon.“Don’t leave yet! How did you know where I live!”She was now walking next to him, and it took him several seconds to answer.“You were carrying a Duel Disk. I inserted the card lying next to it in it, and I managed to find your ID. I then carried you home.”“But why? I mean, you could’ve just left.”“That would’ve been rude.”“I never would’ve known.”“It’s the principle that counts.”“Oh...”The continued walking together, in silence. It didn’t seem as if they were going somewhere.“Sorry for having stayed at your place tonight.”“It’s nothing...I mean, it was allready late and stuff...Where do you live?”“I don’t know. I’m not even sure whether I live in this town.”“Then how did you get here?”“I don’t know. I woke up yesterday morning, in the middle of a market place. It was still early, so I don’t think anyone saw me. I don’t know what happened or where I had been the day before, so I just started walking. I tought I was lucky when I found a street with some deserted houses, hoping one of their doors was open. But then I saw you, and decided I should help.”Ann saw everything in front of her. He must’ve awoken on St.-Edward’s Place.“So, where are you going to sleep tonight?” She had asked it before having thought of what he might answer. He took his time to answer her question again.“Dunno. Think I’ll try to find that street again, Druid Lane or however it was called.“You can stay with me if you want.”Whoops. Had she really said that? He stopped walking, and looked at her again.“Are you serious?”“Otherwise I wouldn’t have asked.” About You - Forum Time: 12-13-2008About You - Forum Activity: 4,100 (excluding this post) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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