JG. Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 V2 Horray for random sig names. Rate, hate and CnC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Well.. Blends well with each other. But you have to admit the C4D is too choppy. I like the placement of them around the render, focal, but you have placed the wireframes completley wrong. Depth is bad. Colours, well are good enough. The background or stock is out of the focal and makes you lose your flow. Keep it up though mate as you are improving as of late. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 I was damn sure this was a gift for CA o-o"Anyways, good to see your doing something =]Using tuts from your palace, eh?Good tag, but still, compare with outcome of tut.Those main C4D's on Altair are a bit pixely ^^Those 2 curved lines in the BG, eh...Depth could be better TBH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 I agree with hioco completey. Cmon bud I know you can do better.You should have added 1 colorful c4d or something like that to give it flow.Just get rid of the wire frame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shadow Thief~ Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Has pretty nice blending I also like how everything fits together nice work:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted March 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 I may edit, I'll post a V2 Shortly. EDIT: V2 added, haven't removed the wireframes yet, but I will in v3 if this isn't good either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Has pretty nice blending I also like how everything fits together nice work:DWhat are you talking about. It doesn't blend well at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 The background is quite empty, do more with it.The C4Ds are pixelated.Depth is okay. Piggy has spoken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiviD Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 I'll critique V2, considering it's the better tag. -Render looks REALLY LQ. -Oversharpen the render on parts?-The blur on the that choppy c4d does not help.-Wireframes nicely placed, IMO.-Flow is destroyed, tbh.-Quite monotone.-Depth could be much better.-C4d/gradient BG isn't done to well.-Blending is a bit*h, no?-I don't see much lighting. =[-Work on the compo a bit. You can do better. =[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted March 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Render prolly seems LQ because of oversharpening... I'll fix it in v3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 well...it is sure empty.v1 is to sharp, v2 to blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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