Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 oh yeah, have you read my ygo fic, link is in my sig, click the "My Fan Fic" spoiler, also, bump DF and ND (Legendhiro's fic) if you dont want it to be faded Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 chapter 12, up now sometimes, I'll replace the character's attack name with my own, but hope this dosen't screw it up [spoiler=Chapter 12]The True Enemy Shows,Yamidramon "Hahahahahahahahahahhahahahaha," laughed a maniacal voice, "so, you've managed to destroy 2 of my strongest pawns huh." "Who are you!" said Max. "I'm the all powerful Yamidramon!" said that voice again. "Show yourself now!!" said Max again. "Why should I?" asked Yamidramon mockingly. "So that you show us that you aren't a chicken." replied Max. Shadows on their surroundings merged together, from there rose a black dragon, Crimson wingflaps, 4 eyes and 4 pair of extremely slim arms, 2 of which is surrounded in dark, shadowy aura. Max's digivice started to shake, he pulled it out and the anylizer read : "Yamidramon, is an ultimate-Level Digimon that controls the power of Darkness, normaly a Magnadramon, but greed and evil corrupted him into a virus type, he attacks with his pure dark-beam, Negative Stream and Dark Pursuit." "Mind if I go, Drake?" asked Weregarurumon "I could use some workout you know." "Don't mind if you do!" replied Drake. "In that case, Burst Limit, Wolf Claw!" said Weregarurumon, his fist ablaze with blue firey aura. He dashed forward and swung his fist into Yamidramon. But Weregarurumon only hit air. "What the F@*k!!!" said Weregarurumon " He can turn untouchable! " "No, That's just the remanant of my shadow." replied Yamidramon, now in front of Weregarurumon. "When did you...." reacted Weregarurumon, before being blasted by Yamidramon's attack, he was sent flying. "Astamon, Myotismon, go!" commanded Chad. "You guys too!" Cindy went on after Chad. "She likes me more!!!!" said Renamon. "No, she likes me!" replied Gatomon. "Me" "Me" "Guys! We're in the middle of a fight here, and don't I just tell you I like you both. It was like 3 seconds ago!!" said Cindy. "Oh, sorry" said Renamon, and she leaot into action, followed by Gatomon. "Diamond Storm." said Renamon, glowing crystals around her, they all rained down towards Yamidramon. "Maverick" said Astamon, shooting rapidly towards Yamidramon. "Crimson Whip" Myotismon gathered energy on his arm, reformed it into a whip and strike Yamidramon. "Lightning Paw!" declared Gatomon, punching Yamidramon rapidly with both her arm. The other non-fighting digimons(Except Flamedramon and Gekiryumon) has evolved into their champion form. "Knuckle fire" said Flamedramon, "Synchro thunder" Thundramon went on, "Meteor Cannon" continued by Flakongmon, "Ice Shower!" Aquadramon goes on , "Striking claw" said Gekiryumon. Flamedramon shoot fireballs at Yamidramon, continued by the Thundramon-shaped thunder bolt, and followed by Burning Meteoroids, as well as Aquadramon's ice shards, finaly, Gekiryumons claw attacks. Each attack hit only Air, when the smoke cleared, Yamidramon dissapeared. "Dammit!" said Max angrily, punching the ground with his fist," If I ever sees him again, he'll become ribbons!. Happy Reading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Great chapter jjack. I actually laughed a bit at Renamon and Gatomon. You got their personalities perfectly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 yo! sorry i haven't commented in awhile. liked the last chapter especially. keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Thx, expect the next chapter to be on tommorow, I need to work on my Yugioh Fic now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 20, 2009 Report Share Posted May 20, 2009 OK, hope I can read it soon. And hopefully, there will be a break between all the fighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 yep a break in the 14th chapter, but it's a little extreme- IN the DESERT! and they chill off in an oaisis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 That sounds like a wonderland for Renamon and Gatomon, but probably a pain in the a** for Astamon and Myotismon. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 yup, this, I totally agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 So, when will Chapter 13 be up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 tommorow at least, If I'm lucky and my mom don't ban me from using it, maybe today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 That's good to hear. At least you're not going to abandon this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Well, I'll keep waiting for chapter 13. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Chapter 13 up, should've been earlier, but my internet was down. [spoiler=Chapter 13]Traveling to the Browser Canyon. It's been hours since the Digidestined fought Yamidramon. "Where are we now, anyways?" asked Joey. "Dunno, the GPS is down here, and the compass, is goin' topsy turny." replied Jason. The monitor of his digivice showing only an arrow that spins counterclockwise, it never stopped. Max suddenly tripped up by something, he knocked to the ground hard, a mouthful of sands. Max spit the sand out from his mouth and asked "Is this a somekind of desert?" "Dunno, replied Jason." Chad whose been entirely silent during the walk, remained silent, Joey busy finding source of water with her binoculars. Cindy meanwhile...... "She likes me more!" said Gatomon, she threw sand at Renamon's eyes. "No me!" Renamon replied by throwing sand back. "Guys chill!!" said Cindy. "Duh, that's why she likes me more, you once stole her bag!" said Gatomon. "You're not bad either, eating all our 3 day food supplies!" challenged Renamon. The two began to fight. "These two are getting on my nerves" Cindy mumbled, then she shouted "Stop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "She started it first." said Renamon. "No, you started it!" replied Gatomon. "Silent! I already told you a 'Gazilion' times, I like both of you!" The two fighting digimons ignored eachother for a while, Gatomon leapt onto Cindy's head, her white fur dosen't seem to absorb any sun rays. "A canyon!" exclaimed Joey. The gang ran over to the canyon, Drake on Weregarurumon's back, Chad sitting on Myotismon's bats, Renamon digivolved into Kyubimon and rushed there, with Cindy ,Gatomon and the other rookie digimons on them. "Whoa, this is enormous!" exclaimed Max. The canyon is like Wild west, saloon, Horses, not real horses actualy but Unimon. "Hey, The digidestined!" said one of the digimons there, a humanoin digimon with a revolver on his chest. "Deputymon is a Mutant Digimon dressed as a cowboy with a gun-end on his metal shirt. He loves to gamble, his favorite gamble of the extent is to challenge the enemy with russian roulette. If he wins, he overlooks them even if they are of the virus kind, although there are times where he participates in the group, the "Virus Busters", to which his impression of justice is strong,and fights Virus types." "Yeah, what do you think they're doing here?" asked another Deputymon. "Maybe to stop SuperStarmon." replied the third Deputymon. The digidestined got into a bar, everybody ordered milk, except Chad, who ordered a glass of Whisky. The time was peaceful until...... "Superstarmon in the town, help!" a little digimon said. "Superstarmon is a Mutant Digimon that is the Digivolved form of Starmon. He is referred to as a legend in his own time." He attacks with his Halley Squal attack." The digidestined ran out to see what happened. And they saw a meteorshower heading to their place, the meteor wrecked serveral buildings. A golden star revealed himself, the attacker, also, a dark chip's on him. "Raizamon! Digivolve, now!" commanded Max, activating Raizamon's evolution chip at the same time. Raizamon grew into his champion form. "Synchro thunder!" Thundramon declared, a Thundramon-shaped lightning bolt shot from him, but Superstarmon dodged it. "He's ultimate!" said Drake, "let Weregarurumon fight him!" Thundramon retreated. "Weregarurumon, attack now!" commanded Drake. "With pleasure!" replied Weregarurumon, whose body's now covered with a blue coating of armor. "Speed Claw!" declared Weregarurumon, he dashes forward, hitting Superstarmon rapidly with his claws. Superstarmon was knocked over, in response, he called another meteorshower with his special attack. Weregarurumon charged his fist with blue aura aiming it on the sky."Wolf claw, Blast version" he declared, and the energy on his arm blasted through serveral meteors, but there's still a whole bunch. "Synchro thunder!" Thundramon Called, he released his thunder to the attack. Superstarmon tried to run, but was de-pixalized by Astamon's 'Maverick' attack, a bullet shot through his heart, and Astamon blew the smoke off his gun barrel. The other digimons digivolved too. "Dragon Wheel, Meteor cannon, Lightning Paw, Crimson Whip, Maverick, Knuckle fire, Striking Claw, Ice shower!" all the Digimon's declared. Each their attacks blasted the meteorshower away, and it was dusk, the explosion occured between the attack's formed fireworks. The next day, the kids started traveling again, hoping to find Yamidramon and destroy him, despite the scorching sun, they all wanted to rest after their fight. Wish you liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 W00T! You really make those catfights between Renamon and Gatomon serious! Me likey! BTW, how can it be that Myotismon and Astamon hasn't said anything yet, except their attacks? It's not like they're mute or something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 nah, I just haven't got any lines for them yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Ok, then I'll keep reading this! When is next chapter up then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 monday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Ok then! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Should've up earlier, but, what the heck, it's here, better than no right?? [spoiler=Chapter 14]The Oaisis of Truth "Right......." said Myotismon "This is getting us where?" "Dunno" replied Chad. "This is a pain in my ass!" shouted Astamon. "Aww, why must we travel to a sunny place like a desert!" continued Astamon."I like darkness, I like shadows!!" "Yeah" agreed Myotismon, "the sun is burning me!" "Whoa......chill guys! "said Max, "If you keep talking, you'll lose more water!" "Oh yeah!" challenged Chad " Who agreed to walk the way that led us here?" ----Flashback---- "Lets go this way." said Max, at the end of the canyon. "You sure?" asked Cindy, "I feel hot wind over here." "Me too." agreed Renamon. "C'mon, it probably leads to a beach!" said Max. "I'm blaming you if something happens!" said Cindy and they all go the way Max chooses. ----Present---- The others stare at Max with evil looking eyes. "Tickle him!" said Joey. "No, stuff his mouth with feathers!" said Raizamon. "No, do both, said Enjumon, who got a handful of sand in his right arm. "Yikes!!!!!" Max started to run, and he was tripped down by something. "Take this, Sand Throw!" Joey, Raizamon, Enjumon and the others start to throw sand at Max. "Hey look guys," said Max, who just finished spitting sand from his mouth, "shade!" The guys looks at where Max's is pointing. "An oaisis!" exclaimed Gatomon. "Finaly some shade." said Myotismon. They each dashed to the oaisis, completely forgot that Max was almost burried by sand. "Raizamon, help!!!" shouted Max. Raizamon pulls Max out from the sand. Meanwhile,Renamon and Gatomon gathers food. "Hey Cindy, wanna try these Coconuts?" asked Gatomon, but before Gatomon can get an answer, Renamon pushes her away,"Want these berries?" "Yep." said Cindy. Gatomon stands up, and lunges his claws at Renamon. "Oh no!" sighed Cindy, her face burried with her fingers. "Buzz of! I'm the one that wants Cindy to have some coconut Water!" shouted Gatomon loudly. "Puh-lese, I'm Cindy's first Digimon partner, before she meets you, you're just some butt-ugly wild cat!" replied Renamon. As the two prepares to fight, Cindy pushes them aside and said:"Stop fighting, lets all relax!" Renamon and Gatomon finaly soften up. "When shall we continue our fight with Yamidramon?" asked Max. "Tommorow?" replied the others "You mean we're gonna sleep here all night?" "Yes." "But desert in the night is dangerous, who knows what danger lurks?" No one cared what Max said. "Aww man........" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Yep, better now than never! Chapter 14 is awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 okay, If I'm lucky enough, Chapter 15 should be up tommorow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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