Freeshooter Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 I was planning on making a Legend of Zelda Fan-Fic, I was wondering if anybody would read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 I might. Maybe give a little sample. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Well... Ok. This is placed at the same time as Link's, but Link, never existed. Example from What would be the first chapter of: The Legend of Zelda: Return of The Twilight [spoiler=Example, I suck at Stories, so...]Lyle had woken up, in his treehouse, in the village of Ordon "What?" Lyle stood up, fell backwards, and hit his head against a board "Why do I keep this here?" Lyle thought to himself. He started to get dressed, but noticed that people were yelling at him from outside. Lyle finished getting dressed and jumped down from his house. "Lyle!" Talo, who was incredulously overexcited, yelled at Lyle although he was already down. "Ya?" Lyle said. "This guy is way overexcited..." Malo whispered while looking at something else, to his left. "Why?" Lyle asked curiously. Beth then said to Lyle "There's a slingshot in for sale in town!" Beth was now excited "Really? Well then, I'll just have to go see how much that slingshot is!" Lyle said happily, he loved the kids, but sometimes, they sent him on the weirdest adventures. Lyle and the kids walked into town "LYYYYLE!!!" The mayor yelled to Lyle "Well, I guess I've gotta go to work for now, I'll be back soon though, kay?" Lyle asked rhetorically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 I probably wouldn't no.. sorry.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Meh, you can try, but I wouldn't read it =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 It needs to be spaced out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 I know it needs to be spaced out. That was an example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Well, then it's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Thankyou! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Just as a rule I don't read fanfic. You're writings not the worst I've seen, but there's definite room for improvement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freeshooter Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Ok then... Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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