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The Magic-Chapter 10 up! (a Harry Potter fanfic)


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  1. 1. What do you think of this Fanfic?

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Patronum isn't even a bad spell' date=' it is an anti dementor and Lethifold spell, if he knows it good for him. It is the same as if Roscuro knew Finite Incantatem (a counterspell). It is powerful but changes nothing personallity wise (but the shape can be used to learn stuff about the person).

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My profile wasn't confusing, just overly detailed since I took allot of thought in him, my point was that Maximus Ardel was not a very thought out character (it even lacked a bio). You should instead make him flesh out the character and then you can accept him. That is what I meant when I said not to accept him.

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Because it is super strong spell, I mean think it is a giant mindless demon made of fire that can destroy anything, if a person can control a fiendfyre that person will be nigh invincible. (And therefore an awesome main antagonist)

 

Did you really know about the Lethifolds? They were only mentioned in fantastic beasts and where to find them. (my favorite book) if you did then your memory is commendable.

 

And that was six sentences, also for your information it is important to have details if you are a serious rper. But i will try to shorten it if you like. Here is a suggestion,

 

big naga bad, big naga kidnap girl, big hero goes to save her, big hero captured, other charecters go to rescue, they win, big hero get Vomit flavour in magic jelly bean, big hero sad D;.

 

It is actually a good idea if you can figure it out.

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Name: Freddie Botts

Age: 11

Rank:(Student, Proffesor, etc) STudent

Bio: He comes from a long line of chefs. He is determined to surpass ever last one of them. His family is rich and he is able to afford high quality ingredients to make his candy (which have special effects like how Chocalate frogs are animate). He actually uses them in combat to great effect (using the fire breathing properties of pepper imps with the indestructible bubbles of Drooble's Best Blowing Gum to make a fire bomb and ect) Because of his creative fighting style he can catch people off guard and is a highly formidable opponent. He is also really good with potions (all in all he is a mad scientist).

Personality: He is extremely imaginative and creative. He will have ideas that no one has thought of or ideas that people thought over and he hadn't noticed. He uses this creativity to make foods (which he has an obvious obbsession over). He has nearly no sense of fear or caution since he is willing to make big risks for the sake of cooking knowledge... or maybe he's just an idiot.

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