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The Magic-Chapter 10 up! (a Harry Potter fanfic)


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What time is the harry potter fanfic taking place (it can't take place at the end of the books for obvious reasons)

 

Name: Roscuro

Age:(11-60 Very Happy) 15

Rank:(Student, Proffesor, etc) Student

Bio: Roscuro is a unique individual, he doesn't require a wand to cast magic (wands being necessary actually confuse me). He was born not nowing his birth parents, his mom dieing in child birth and the dad already being dead, no one knows who they are. To survive from a deadly dieses he had he had a blood transfusion from an arcane dragon who adopted him later (this explains why he doesn't need a wand). He is extremely powerful but shy.

Personality: He is somewhat shy which is odd considering his powers which you would think would make him boastful. He likes food allot since his magic burns allot of calories he manages to stay skinny despite this, he has unique tastes in food and will at least try anything edible and eats meat raw. He enjoys books allot so can be found at the library (he isn't a brainy nerd but he is curious and reads allot of fantasy). Also he plays magic the gathering.

Appearance:updxnagj_Planeswalkers_jace.jpg

 

An arcane dragon is a dragon are giant winged lizards capable of exhaling fire. They are highly intelligent and powerful magic users, not requoring uttering a spell name or using a wand, all they have to do is will it (they will usually utter the spell name just for wizard's sake so they know what they are doing.

 

My charecter is not evil no matter what, even if he is slytherin he doesn't know his parents so can't reasonably degrade halfbloods and the like.

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Might as well make him Ravenclaw then, that way he has more screen time... I mean because he is a genious and too shy to be in Gryffindor... It has absolutley nothing to do with me having secret plans to force you to gradually make him the main charecter or anything....

 

Nope definitely no secret plans

 

*Whistles nervously*

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Slytherin charecter coming up.

Name: Vipera (the name for the Viper genus, I'm so subtle it hurts)

Age:(11-60 Very Happy) 15 or so

Rank:(Student, Proffesor, etc) Student

Bio: He comes from a family that were parseltounge and specialized in snake control. He turned out to be a natural at magic and few people can beat him at it. Because of that he grew arrogant and thinks he is nearly unbeatable. The problem is, he actually is nearly impossible to beat, people say he is even better at magic then Dumbeldore was at his age. However while he has power he lacks friends which made him cold, he sees the battle between RAvenclaw and Slytherin as a way to finally have a challenge...

Personality: Snoob, he thinks he's better than everyone but that is mainly do to the fact that no one has managed to prove him wrong. He is not one to keep a grudge but if you beat him he will constantly try to best you merely so he can be the best again. He thinks that if you can't keep up with him you aren't worth his notice.

Appearance: He wears snake leather, very tall, generally intimidating, long black hair, sunglasses. etc

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Patronum isn't even a bad spell, it is an anti dementor and Lethifold spell, if he knows it good for him. It is the same as if Roscuro knew Finite Incantatem (a counterspell). It is powerful but changes nothing personallity wise (but the shape can be used to learn stuff about the person).

 

My profile wasn't confusing, just overly detailed since I took allot of thought in him, my point was that Maximus Ardel was not a very thought out character (it even lacked a bio). You should instead make him flesh out the charecter and then you can accept him. That is what I meant when I said not to accept him.

 

You should have one of the slytherins use Fiendfyre next. Also Crucio should be negated by an Finite Incantatem since if you are being tortured by Crucio you can't cast spells it's beyond a human's mental limits.

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