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The Union of Justice! Book 1: The Rise Of Daemonus. [EPILOGUE UP!]


.:Abarai Renji:.

Should I make a Sequel?  

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  1. 1. Should I make a Sequel?

    • HELL YEAH!
    • Meh, maybe...
    • NO! NO!! I'M GONNA COMMIT SUICIDE!!!


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Since I have apparently criticized so much on what were somewhat close to flaws (personally they were to infinitesimal to count as flaws in my opinion) I will do a compliment that I relized when I was offline a few minutes ago.

 

Renamon raping Rika: Well played.

 

You see it sends a message, at the beginning we have Renamon as a loyal friend to Rika who would gladly die for Rika's sake. Now we have Rika (who is going through so much stress right now that it is not even amusing) getting raped by the very person who would have died for her. This above anything proves that this is not the old Renamon, she might have had a small piece of the old her inside before she went second stage but not anymore, know she is a violent perversion of nature who just wears Renamon's body, it is like she is not even Renamon anymore but a completely different character. (Maybe you should change her name to make it more complete, or have her new evil side have one name and her old good side still be Renamon).

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That could work, the other possibility would be the evil Renamon being like the inner hollow of that Bleach guy or like the Nine Tails Fox, a extremely powerful evil entity that haunts the character but occasionally provides add since he doesn't want his host to die because he would die with him.

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