fenrir Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 i haven't got anything against' date=' i was just saying it in a ...erm actually i can't think of the word i'm looking for.[/quote'] Wrong? I find it so wrong with Renamon mark form. other than that I like 'em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 The only thing I didn't like was that, "is it me or was that a Lesbian scene?" when Renamon...played with Rika. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Lezzie seen is fine, it's just uh, CURSED MARK RENAMON. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Well, I do agree that her form would have been..."weird". EDIT: I would have liked to submit a character but I have no character from a show I want to put in.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Furious Reaper I Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 nice perverted moment Kuja and another bad ass fight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Well' date=' I do agree that her form would have been..."weird". EDIT: [b']I would have liked to submit a character but I have no character from a show I want to put in....[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Well, I don't accept chars anymore. It ain't my style...sorry!:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 No, it's alright. I wasn't going to make a char anyway, just wanted to point out that I don't feel good about "taking" a character from a show... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Okay... That was odd.... Sad thing is your going to make Renamon a twisted evil sub conscious (since she is not human I can't say subhuman) being. And you know what your gonna do later, your gonna remove the curse mark, Renamon will be a goody two shoes, she will say sorry and everyone will instantly forgive her. Because that's what you do, you won't go all the way. If it was my fan fic I would have gotten Orochimaru and Warrior of light killed by a supervillian to display his huge power. Then Renamon will become said villians thrall, then she is killed by Rika. That way people know your not gonna be soft, they die and they become evil, but they won't go back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Okay... That was odd.... Sad thing is your going to make Renamon a twisted evil sub conscious (since she is not human I can't say subhuman) being. And you know what your gonna do later' date=' your gonna remove the curse mark, Renamon will be a goody two shoes, she will say sorry and everyone will instantly forgive her. Because that's what you do, you won't go all the way. [b']If it was my fan fic I would have gotten Orochimaru and Warrior of light killed by a supervillian to display his huge power. Then Renamon will become said villians thrall, then she is killed by Rika. That way people know your not gonna be soft, they die and they become evil, but they won't go back.[/b] That sounds like what I was going to do O.o DAMN YOU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Okay... That was odd.... Sad thing is your going to make Renamon a twisted evil sub conscious (since she is not human I can't say subhuman) being. And you know what your gonna do later' date=' your gonna remove the curse mark, Renamon will be a goody two shoes, she will say sorry and everyone will instantly forgive her. Because that's what you do, you won't go all the way. If it was my fan fic I would have gotten Orochimaru and Warrior of light killed by a supervillian to display his huge power. Then Renamon will become said villians thrall, then she is killed by Rika. That way people know your not gonna be soft, they die and they become evil, but they won't go back.[/quote'] Frohawk if your gonna complain about how someone does a fan fic, DO YOUR OWN GOD DAMN FAN FIC THEN. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Okay... That was odd.... Sad thing is your going to make Renamon a twisted evil sub conscious (since she is not human I can't say subhuman) being. And you know what your gonna do later' date=' [b']your gonna remove the curse mark[/b], Renamon will be a goody two shoes, she will say sorry and everyone will instantly forgive her. Because that's what you do, you won't go all the way. If it was my fan fic I would have gotten Orochimaru and Warrior of light killed by a supervillian to display his huge power. Then Renamon will become said villians thrall, then she is killed by Rika. That way people know your not gonna be soft, they die and they become evil, but they won't go back. 1: WHO SAID ANYTHING ABOUT ME REMOVING HER CURSE MARK, SMART FACE?! 2: Well, maybe not EVERYONE will forgive her!!! 3: IF YOU GOT SO MANY FRICKIN' GOOD IDEAS, WHY DON'T YOU USE THEM IN YOUR OWN FAN FIC, AND STOP WASTING YOUR TIME READING THIS?!?! Sorry, I'm just in a very foul mood since my Internet is f*cked up... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 It's alright, you have the rights to complain after what Frohawk posted... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 hope the internet for you gets fixed soon kuja Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 I'm not, it's just that I start noticing a pattern and I am pointing out something similar, if it looks like you are following a road their is nothing more shocking than a sudden turn. Metaphor aside, I am noticing a pattern somewhat, by doing something completely unexpected but not outright ridiculous then you completely shake up the story making it more interesting than many can normally accomplish. Plus I am making a fan fic, I am getting the premises written up. Finally the sole reason I am complaining is that if you complain someone improves the work so that you shut up, if you compliment they don't see anything wrong and don't improve the work. AKA I am complaining because criticism improves better than compliments. It's still a good fanfic. Also I am clearly not good with dealing with people. Last but not least the Curse mark is removed once Orochimaru dies, keep that in mind (He must die since leaving a super powered supervillian alive is not your style)Also the reason I am certain she will be forgiven is that since Shadow was let out of his cell in your other fanfic and not instantly locked up again even though he more or less destroyed Mobius and tried to kill them means that Renamon will be forgiven for a small thing like trying to kill them. Aww, I got negged, now my feelings are hurt... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Make that Double negged... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 ... Okay now you are gaining up on me for zero reasons, did you even read the above post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Well, sorry then. I was just in a foul mood. I'm just trying to write as good as I can... Please don't say that I'm writing predictably, you're making me feel bad. As if I'm no good Fan Fic writer...:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 You are a good writer, you just seem to like to do things this one way. It's similar to how you always know that Yugi cannot lose a card game. This makes it all the more amazing in the 1 time he actually loses (I think it was against Raphael). Though I guess you should just do things your way since I don't even know if my idea would work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 FIRE THE MISSLIZ! *Fires Neg Star* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Okay, thanks!:) Neg-rep removed! Have a nice day!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Hmpf, fine...Neg destroyed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Hmpf' date=' fine...Neg destroyed...[/quote'] Reversal jabroni! Ok, I honestly couldn't resist saying that. While Fro strikes certain points, that's just how Kuja types =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Fine now we can all forget about that... Hey Kudaj, maybe you should give the hero Choccobo's to use as steeds, I don't see many forms of transportation so they must be tired when they travel, also you did not mention Harry's skill with his Firebolt, maybe it would be wise for him to use it during his fight. Finally Fenir, please remove Omega's neg if you would be so kind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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