.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 It sure does! And I am such an Expert in evilness!......next to Fenrir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 meh, fenrir ain't that evil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Have you seen him in action?!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 in what exactly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Okay suggestion time1 to symbolize Renamon's desend into darkness you should make her digivolve to Youkomon or something, that or make her wear a disguise so no one recognizes her until it is revealed later.2 To combat Renamon you must bust out the king anti hero, you must bring out... Alucard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 1. Great Idea! A disguise for Renamon coming up! 2. No, sorry, but I will turn this offer down. Alucard is no longer my style(Which explains my Writer's Block on The Night). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Furious Reaper I Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 another brilliant chapter Kuja Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Thanks! Can't you be more specific on WHAT you found brilliant? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Chapter 16 up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Furious Reaper I Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 you want me to say what i found brilliant about chapter 15? erm.... let me think. i thought that making Renamon slither was a good idea and how it looked to me that she was freaking out about it in her head and the fact that you have turned her evil so soon after her curse mark was given to her by the creepy snake guy was brilliant as well. there you go now for chapter 16 a very good chapter. i actually liked Renamon's disguise and now the battle between the Union of Justice and erm.....the bad guys is set. I thought that chapter 16 was supposed to be when Renamon activated the second level of her curse mark. There you go. you wanted detail and you got mostly detail and some waffle (nonesense) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Ok, thanks! I just like details. And yes, it was supposed to be so, but the plot is moved to this: Chapter 17: The Union reaches the castle, Lee fights Gaara. Chapter 18: Rika is forced to fight Renamon, and she activates CM Lv2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Furious Reaper I Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 oh right. ok then. cant wait for chap 17 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 1. Great Idea! A disguise for Renamon coming up! 2. No' date=' sorry, but I will turn this offer down. Alucard is no longer my style(Which explains my Writer's Block on The Night).[/quote'] Okay, I only suggested him because he might have been accepted. Maybe you should throw in some summons to the mix of good and evil? Also a choccobo, who doesn't love choccobos? Finally I also suggest you use Shrinryu (the famous superboss) Cecil, Golbez (however this guy is likley to be a hero in the story despite his game role) and maybe the Four Archfiends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Nah, I'll keep to what I have now. And I already planned some summons... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 WTFOMGBBQ?!?! SUMMONS!!!!!! Q_Q I will be expecting overkill <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 and so would i. Good chapter kuja Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Chapter 17 is here!!! The longest chapter so far! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 DAMN. Lee's dead but thats one hell of a way to go, defeating a demon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Yea, sadly enough, Konoha's Beautiful Green Beast: Rock Lee, has met his fate, taking Gaara of the Desert along with him in his death... May God be with him...:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 You do realize that he could have probably won if you got him drunk (when he's drunk his attacks are unpredictable and allot stronger if you remember). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Yea, I remember. But PLEASE, Frohawk! Where's the DRAMA?!? I mean, if the good guys just use ALL of the moves and stuff they use in the Anime Series, how interesting would it be if they always won, hhhhhmmmmmmmmmm?!? :?:?:?:?:? BTW, has anyone noticed the Character Register? I edited it a bit, and added a Theme Song for both the Good guys and Bad guys' Team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Lee's dead....what a sad ending. That was a useless ending...can't the Final Fighters just use "Pheonix Down" on Lee?!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Well, they fell into separate pitfalls in the entrance, so no. BTW, have you seen the changes I made for the Char Register? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Yes, of course. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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