TrickyPooBoy Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 First of all, welcome one and all to the Insanity™! I am your host! Let me introduce the characters to you: [spoiler=Torchic]Torchic is the main character in this fan-fic. He is not that well powerful, and gets stressed at times. He prefers to remain on the safe side, but he also likes adventure at times.[spoiler=Larvitar]Larvitar is a rowdy little guy who challenges almost any Pokemon that comes by. He loves adventure, but he is not so powerful... not yet, at least...:twisted:[spoiler=Machop]Machop is a complete show-off. He'll do anything to get some attention. Mainly, his burliness gets him into trouble sometimes.[spoiler=Magikarp]Magikarp is a complete joke. On the outside, he is a sore loser. But if someone irritates him enough... he can be fierce... :twisted:[spoiler=Shiny Zangoose] Shiny Zangoose is DA BOMB! He is strong. Nothing else really to say.[spoiler=Banette]We needed a villain in this comic. So..... here he is! The evil mastermind who hates this comic and tries to destroy it. [spoiler=Episode 1: The gathering! :D][spoiler=Episode 2: Banette appears! :twisted:] Of course, I will be adding more of this fan-fic later. I hope you enjoy it. Please no flaming. So, read/enjoy/comment! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 *Jaw opens*......WOW....I LOLed at the Magikarp scene HAaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Thanx! I'm glad you like it! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Phail. This is the fan fic section, not a comic one. This should be moved to show case. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 its cool, and very funny, keep it coming !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 ROFL "I PWNED THIS GUY!" "SHOOP THA WOOP" "...." Lol, May I requests a Character?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Sure, I take requests. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Banette! :lol: No Seriousleh Though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 you might wanna listen to Fenrir....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 not necessarily a fanfic, however, the 'shoop da whoop' scene was amusing, but you could improve you standard of comic, making the boxes smaller/ sprites bigger, enhancing art, speech bubbles etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Try and find Platinum Sprites. I like them better. Lol, you did the Magikarp thing for me, right? RIGHT???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Wrong section. Waaaay too random, and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot. If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort. The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores. With all due respect,|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Ok, now how about the positives? :lol: I'll see if I can add Banette, not a bad ides. He will be the villain :twisted: and I'd be pleased if a mod could move this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Wrong section. Waaaay too random' date=' and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot. If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort. The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores. With all due respect,|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM I lol'd there. Hard. Anyway, I was the first one to bring sprite comics to this forum (no, really. I think. :P) and I have to say yours is poor. Take a look at mine and try re-making this - I see potential, you've just done it wrong. D: Go here, take a look at mine and try and do something like that. It'll look better. PM me for more info. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Oh. Cool. I came up with the idea as well, but it was already in use...:lol: A poor comic? How? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Wrong section. Waaaay too random' date=' and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot. If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort. The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores. With all due respect,|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM I lol'd there. Hard. Anyway, I was the first one to bring sprite comics to this forum (no, really. I think. :P)We shall see.EDIT: No, my title works. I don't think you had even joined when PMDung aired.EDIT: Yeah, I was here before you. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Yea... a 4 star to a 6 star... you've been here longer xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Wrong section. Waaaay too random' date=' and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot. If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort. The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores. With all due respect,|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM I lol'd there. Hard. Anyway, I was the first one to bring sprite comics to this forum (no, really. I think. :P)We shall see.EDIT: No, my title works. I don't think you had even joined when PMDung aired.EDIT: Yeah, I was here before you. Sorry. Fair enough...but you're still not the 'master'. You can't just name yourself that. :P Yea... a 4 star to a 6 star... you've been here longer xD That doesn't mean he's better. A spammer could be a 6 star - does that make them good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Yup. Let's not get offtopic here, gentlemen. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Fair enough...but you're still not the 'master'. You can't just name yourself that. :P That doesn't mean he's better. A spammer could be a 6 star - does that make them good?Sure you can. And in this case, I have appraised each comic in terms of humor, graphic quality, and sophistication; mine comes out on top. On the other hand, there are plenty of n00bs in RP that have thousands more posts than I. Ontopic: Next issue pl0x; we can't be kept waiting this long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Sorry, I'll get on that now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andre007 Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 its well cool my fave seen is the magicarp blast bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Chapter 2 posted. Change of characters, too! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Wow, nice one. You took in no, literally zero, improvement suggestions, meaning your comic still looks bad, the plot isn't great, text is hard to read and it's incredibly random. Good luck getting readers. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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