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Background is rather boring and empty, it looks like it's supposed to be smoke or something but it just fades into this empty blackness

The smoke thing going over him doesn't really add much, doesn't do much blending, and just makes him seem a little transparent

Some of the lines and shapes are rather pixelated

The little brushing going from his left shoulder (our perspective) and curving around doesn't add anything appealing to the tag nor connects with the general look

The blocky castle thing you have in the background is completely useless and just kills the whole smoke thing you have going on, the pointy castle top on the bottom right does so as well

The curves on the right are random as well is the slightly light orange brush amongst all the dark blue, purple, and black

Blending is meh on the left but doesn't really fit on the right

Bad lighting, it's like there is a single beam coming from the top while the render clearly shows from the top left

Not much depth

Text could do with a lot of work, just don't bother with it for now, it'll only make your stuff look worse

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