Huntar! Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 lol, conceded poem: Why can't I make up my mind?Why must I be plagued with choice?Life can't life be planned before it happens.If not can I just be blind? Why must I always be so vain?Why do I appear so charming?No one knows who the real me is.Can you also feel my pain? Is it option A? Or B? Or even C?Or is it D, all of the above?I like them all. They all like me.With which one should I be? The one that is lovely and wants me bad?The one that makes me grind my teeth?The one who tries to make me think?The one who being sad makes me sad? Dilema after dilema. Problem after problem.Just let me have one. And just one.Dont plague me with these options.Before I can't take it and I leave them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 wow it really made me think of options in life O.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 Curious. You have paradoxially spotlighted the quintessence of life: a series of choices, played out to their conclusion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 Alright! I have some ideas and suggestions for this club: -Ranks-Contests (Maybe 1 on 1's)-Poem of the day/week-Poet of the week/month-Poetry quizzes/tests-You think of more ideas. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 hmmm i could see the contests working as long as they are not card contests(wouldn't know how that'd work). Everything else seems fine other than ranks. How could you have ranks? what would they be called Jubjub bird? frumious Bandersnatch? can't see the rank system working. though poem of the week sounds epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 i dont like the poetry quizzes/tests. The contest would be fun though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 [spoiler=Influence]Future influences the pastPast is just another clashParadoxes keep coming in a flashMore ultimatums and more paths New begginings; New future,Less faulties; less ruthless,Pick the wrong choice and the future is uselessSo stay above the influence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 so its a poem about drugs and alchohol? thats good O.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 [spoiler=You Better Listen]You better listenKnow what's happeningKnow what's realSo you're not alone. When it's all said and doneYou better knowWake up in wonderlandWith your heart racingThoughts flyingThrough your headYour mind blursSenses dulled,Are you aliveOr are you dead?You would knowBut you didn't listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 Alright! I have some ideas and suggestions for this club: -Ranks (I might do this soon.)-Contests (Maybe 1 on 1's) (Hm' date=' I don't like leaving people out.)-Poem of the day/week (Possibly week. This would have to include voting.)-Poet of the week/month (Month is likely. Again, would need to vote.)-Poetry quizzes/tests (Ooh, nice idea! I know some tricky poems I could post. :twisted:-You think of more ideas. =) (I was thinking poetry contests for everyone, so that everyone can join. I hate to limit it to 2 people. For the contests I might ask that you write in a certain style.)[/quote'] Thank you for your ideas! Thaynx for supporting the club! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 Good ideas, yet the rank could hurt some people. (even myself) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 Suggestions sound fine. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 Good ideas' date=' yet the rank could hurt some people. (even myself)[/quote'] How so? Just write more poems! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 hm what ever rank i am i really don't care so... yeah and i'll post some more pomes when i get back online i think i have three i didn't post .... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 Good ideas' date=' yet the rank could hurt some people. (even myself)[/quote'] How so? Just write more poems! ^_^ I thought if there was ranks, they would be based on the overall grade of the poem, not on the poem count lol.But sure, ill write more laterz!^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Good ideas' date=' yet the rank could hurt some people. (even myself)[/quote'] How so? Just write more poems! ^_^ I thought if there was ranks, they would be based on the overall grade of the poem, not on the poem count lol.But sure, ill write more laterz!^-^ Definitely, I would count that too. (You're actually pretty good..) [align=center]Notice: Time for a poetry contest!! Listen up if you want to take part! Rules: For this contest, you must write 2 limericks! (If you don't know what a limerick is, look it up.) They could be funny or they could be sad, whatever. I don't care what they're about. (No bad language though..) Prize: The person who makes the best poem will receive a +rep and an award! For this contest, I will need 2 more judges besides me. If you want to be a judge, just let me know that you do. 1. .:Raelen//:Solo:.2. Duckmasta20203. End date: I will give you until Tuesday the 7th to complete your limericks.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 [align=center][spoiler=[b]Wasteland of Conquered Fears[/b]]As I walk amongst the darknessI feel the impact of Hell on my skinI see the nothingness of closed eyelids as if I was deadI hear the echos of my own heartbeatBouncing off the walls which lie hidden behind the curtains of loitering shadowsI smell the stench I aquire from the mysteriesLatent of what illudes my eyesI think of the Hellish horrors that might grasp me with their damning clawsAnd make my blood leak from my spiritThese memories keep flashing backAs I see the scars of fear attached to my trembling fleshI cannot remove them, until my latent spirit healsAnd I can just peel off the fear from my bodyToss it aside and watch it burn in front of my pious eyesAnd leave the ashes amongst the wastelands ofConquered fears. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Definitely' date=' I would count that too. (You're actually pretty good..)[/quote'] Lol thanx but some people on here are like a mini Poe... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 I'll be a judge. I'm not too good at writing limericks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 [align=center]My limericks! ^_^ (This one will be kinda disturbing...) My inner abdomen is burningMy stomach is violently churningI turn green in the faceOh how awful, puke tastesNo more sweets, that is what I am learning. I'm writing this poem with a penCause I had some time to spendBut I guess I got boredSo then my mind soaredAnd never came back again.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 I'll be a judge. I'm not too good at writing limericks. Okay, added! ^_^ @ Blud: 0_o That one is disturbing! Your limericks will be added, though I would recommend trying again.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Hm..I wanna judge AND enter..But that would be BAIISISIIEDD>.....>.<So ill just post one later.I actually was writing one, finished, and i was gonna post...Then my internet failed..Then i restarted my compu not remembering the poem..FML. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Hm..I wanna judge AND enter..But that would be BAIISISIIEDD>.....>.<So ill just post one later.I actually was writing one' date=' finished, and i was gonna post...Then my internet failed..Then i restarted my compu not remembering the poem..FML.[/quote'] Ah, that's too bad.. Yeah, judges aren't allowed to enter poems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 *enterz* [spoiler=Market]I went to the market one dayI saw my cousein there said hey! He looked at me with furiousity Stared at went up to meSaid, "Who are you? Stay away." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 *enterz* [spoiler=Market]I went to the market one dayI saw my cousein there said hey! He looked at me with furiousity Stared at went up to meSaid' date=' "Who are you? Stay away." [/quote'] You might want to do this over.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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