Toxic-skull Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Lying? Eh? I have to be honest; I'm not sure. Spawn got the closest... :) You don't want to lie in court' date=' so what is the opposite of lieing? *Oh, please, get this.. If you don;t, I get to make fun of you for the rest of your life.*[/quote']hump your to late on that i'm already made fun of every single day of my life already!and i guess the truth too..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 [spoiler=Ultimate Beggining]Just follow the lonely riverDown a pitch black streamThe heat of the frost makes you shiverBut the beating sun makes you gleam.As much as you try to make amendsYour desperate guilt hungers on sorrow.But happieness thrives on unimaginable wins.Venture through your own deep sorrowAnd you'll come into an ultimate beggining. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 [spoiler=Ultimate Beggining]Just follow the lonely riverDown a pitch black streamThe heat of the frost makes you shiverBut the beating sun makes you gleam.As much as you try to make amendsYour desperate guilt hungers on sorrow.But happieness thrives on unimaginable wins.Venture through your own deep sorrowAnd you'll come into an ultimate beggining. Ooh, ooh, ooh! I like it! Very nice imagery! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 :roll: i'm to a poet! :evil: Hell yeah you are.And a damn good one too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 EMERGENCY POST! Just checking in. I haven't posted here in a while. You can thank Avanz for getting me back in the whole poetry buisness with his "Fear of Enjoyment" poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Hey guys whats up?! hope you all had a good Easter(if you celebrate it). Here's another poem.[spoiler=Sometimes]Sometimes, I hear people cursing my nameAnd I find myself wishing to do the same.Sometimes, I know I need to go somewhereAnd I don’t know where to go out there.Sometimes, I wish I could be just like youAnd I know it will never come true.Sometimes, I hope it will all come to an endAnd I never realize it’s all just pretend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 Ok well i made this one in study hall in my book of rhymes... It may not rhyme. When i try to get up my ears close and my eyes well up.When i try to take myself away from time and space;Everything i've ever known, its just all sheet to me though.I try to survive, combine what reality is to what my mind defines it;And try to live a long life. Trying to keep my eyes shut;Trying to keep my head up;Its tough;And as much as i try i'll still wake up.Friends betray me,While the economy slays me,And i'll still strike back one day crazy.Love craves me, While religion sways my mind away from the real me.WHile i try too keep myself calm,I still read the Quran,While i keep myself alarmed.Book of Rhymes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 I wrote this in school. Inspired by Tool's 46 & 2. ShadowsTouch my skinClinging to myPast again. ShadowsPull me inSense the darknessAll within. Searching for myself inside of me.Barricade the doors I'm reaching to.Searching for myself inside of you.I don't think I have a path to choose. I, know to walk and to,Crawl, eat and sleep just to,Know, take for granted to,Die, just so I get mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 Really nice poems everyone! I'm proud of you! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Come on guys! write! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Heres one of my older poems.[spoiler=Love under the moonlight]I sang this songLate at nightThinking about youAnd your delightWe stared at the starsAnd I marveled at the sightThat was your faceShining in the moonlightFrom then on I knewEverything would be alrightBanished were my fearsAnd all my frightHolding you closeHolding you tightI realized then thatYou were my light Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Heres one of my older poems.[spoiler=Love under the moonlight]I sang this songLate at nightThinking about youAnd your delightWe stared at the starsAnd I marveled at the sightThat was your faceShining in the moonlightFrom then on I knewEverything would be alrightBanished were my fearsAnd all my frightHolding you closeHolding you tightI realized then thatYou were my light Sappy. Still, it's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Here's a banner for the club. What'ya think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Fantastic. I absolutely love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Here's a banner for the club. What'ya think? It's good! The capital P and the capital L are a little hard to read though.. Nice though! ^_^It's also a tad blurry around the edges and the quill.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Looks amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Heres one of my older poems.[spoiler=Love under the moonlight]I sang this songLate at nightThinking about youAnd your delightWe stared at the starsAnd I marveled at the sightThat was your faceShining in the moonlightFrom then on I knewEverything would be alrightBanished were my fearsAnd all my frightHolding you closeHolding you tightI realized then thatYou were my light it is very good. i like the rhyming and it's romantic.Here's a banner for the club. What'ya think? it fits the club perfectly and i know i cant top that.[offtopic]: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-114415.html [/offtopic] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Heres one of my older poems.[spoiler=Love under the moonlight]I sang this songLate at nightThinking about youAnd your delightWe stared at the starsAnd I marveled at the sightThat was your faceShining in the moonlightFrom then on I knewEverything would be alrightBanished were my fearsAnd all my frightHolding you closeHolding you tightI realized then thatYou were my light it is very good. i like the rhyming and it's romantic.Here's a banner for the club. What'ya think? it fits the club perfectly and i know i cant top that.[offtopic]: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-114415.html [/offtopic] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Alright: Anyone who wants to can add the banner made by BludMonkey to their sig. Let's support the club people!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Alright: Anyone who wants to can add the banner made by BludMonkey to their sig. Let's support the club people!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 [spoiler=Who am I?][align=center]Who am I? Where have i gone? What voice controls my tone? Im not a genious, but a pastor, no cleavage, no master. I've tried my best, to enjoy, and dont forget, im not a toy. I've never changed, never left. Never been kept. I've endured torture before, mind raping and concious chaining, and i still have enough wits to not go crazy. Dont play me, ill play you. Dont be sleepy, ill waste you. Im not a murderer, im not a hunter. Im nothing i want to be except for a wanderer. I may be little, i may be small, but inside im nothing but tall. I may trip along the way, i may fall, but ill get up, and ill answer my call. I m not really religious, im different, i could be considered an idiot. I'm a poet, a poet laureate, im an elite duelist, im the best you can get. I make friends easily, easy to get, easy to make fun of, and heck, i dont give a damn. I dont give if you know me, but if you do ill be there. Ill be there to help, i'll be your secret key. You may consider yourself amazing, but i know you arent, and even if you are, i dont give a fart. I put myself under others, no confidence no bravery. But in the right time i provide much clarity, share with me, your life story. I'll hold it dear and it'll be mentioned in the glory. Thats me.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 heres some more pomes form me[align=center][spoiler=The Tune of the Twin Towers] The Tune of the Twin TowersFor no one is left, for it’s only a terrifying memory, from the white ghosts all a row, From the murky leaking roof to the dampened windows, “therefore” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “ this is the tune of the twin towers. For no one sees them,They sit by the ruble remains of the towers,They cry on what had happened,“Alas” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “this is the tune of the twin towers” If any of the living go the remains of the towers now,They would wind up dieing in the rubble just like the others,All of the poor unfornate souls claimed by the twin towers,“death is sadness” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “this is the tune of the twin towers” [spoiler=“Follow Your Dreams”]“Follow Your Dreams”Follow your dreams on a journey,Follow your dreams across the country,Follow your dreams to the Pacific Ocean,Follow your dreams to the great caves that have been reformed by man, Follow your dreams and let your heart swore into the land of laudably and dreams… [spoiler=Hatred]“Hatred”The feeling I hate most,The feeling that controls my anger,The feeling that you get when you want to kill someone,The feeling the lives on a flame that burns brighter every second of every day,The feeling that releases the storm inside,The feeling I always fell is hatred… [spoiler=“Captured”]“Captured”Why was I the one,Why did the Fire Lord chose me,Why was I the next Moon GodWhy was I the power fullest out of the Moon tribe, Now because of that I’ve been captured,Now I’m in the Fire Lord’s torcher chamber,Now my powers are going to be taken away,Now I’m never going to see Reala again,Now that I’m here my life to over, Their is no hope for me now,Their won’t be any prayers answered, Here I won’t even see tomorrow,Here I see my life before me,Here my last breath and memory, I see Reala the one I love and the one who has protected me all this time,I see the memory fade to black…. Here being captured really sucks! [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 [spoiler=Who am I?][align=center]Who am I? Where have i gone? What voice controls my tone? Im not a genious' date=' but a pastor, no cleavage, no master. I've tried my best, to enjoy, and dont forget, im not a toy. I've never changed, never left. Never been kept. I've endured torture before, mind raping and concious chaining, and i still have enough wits to not go crazy. Dont play me, ill play you. Dont be sleepy, ill waste you. Im not a murderer, im not a hunter. Im nothing i want to be except for a wanderer. I may be little, i may be small, but inside im nothing but tall. I may trip along the way, i may fall, but ill get up, and ill answer my call. I m not really religious, im different, i could be considered an idiot. I'm a poet, a poet laureate, im an elite duelist, im the best you can get. I make friends easily, easy to get, easy to make fun of, and heck, i dont give a damn. I dont give if you know me, but if you do ill be there. Ill be there to help, i'll be your secret key. You may consider yourself amazing, but i know you arent, and even if you are, i dont give a fart. I put myself under others, no confidence no bravery. But in the right time i provide much clarity, share with me, your life story. I'll hold it dear and it'll be mentioned in the glory. Thats me.[/align'] Interesting to read. Telling a bit about yourself eh?!heres some more poems form me[align=center][spoiler=The Tune of the Twin Towers] The Tune of the Twin TowersFor no one is left' date='for it’s only a terrifying memory,from the white ghosts all a row, From the murky leaking roof to the dampened windows, “therefore” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “ this is the tune of the twin towers. For no one sees them,They sit by the ruble remains of the towers,They cry on what had happened,“Alas” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “this is the tune of the twin towers” If any of the living would go to the remains of the towers now,They would wind up dieing in the rubble just like the others,All of the poor unfortunate souls claimed by the twin towers,“death is sadness” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “this is the tune of the twin towers” I felt this had fairly good imagery.[spoiler=“Follow Your Dreams”']“Follow Your Dreams”Follow your dreams on a journey,Follow your dreams across the country,Follow your dreams to the Pacific Ocean,Follow your dreams to the great caves that have been reformed by man, Follow your dreams and let your heart swore into the land of laudably and dreams… It was nice and inspiring. [spoiler=Hatred]“Hatred”The feeling I hate most,The feeling that controls my anger,The feeling that you get when you want to kill someone,The feeling that lives on a flame that burns brighter every second of every day,The feeling that releases the storm inside,The feeling I always feel is hatred… Hehe I feel that way sometimes too but its generally clouded by insanity. [spoiler=“Captured”]“Captured”Why was I the one,Why did the Fire Lord chose me,Why was I the next Moon GodWhy was I the most powerful out of the Moon tribe, Now because of that I’ve been captured,Now I’m in the Fire Lord’s torture chamber,Now my powers are going to be taken away,Now I’m never going to see Reala again,Now that I’m here my life to over, There is no hope for me now,There won’t be any prayers answered, Here I won’t even see tomorrow,Here I see my life before me,Here my last breath and memory, I see Reala the one I love and the one who has protected me all this time,I see the memory fade to black…. Here being captured really sucks! I really liked this one and thought it was interesting.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 [spoiler=Who am I?][align=center]Who am I? Where have i gone? What voice controls my tone? Im not a genious' date=' but a pastor, no cleavage, no master. I've tried my best, to enjoy, and dont forget, im not a toy. I've never changed, never left. Never been kept. I've endured torture before, mind raping and concious chaining, and i still have enough wits to not go crazy. Dont play me, ill play you. Dont be sleepy, ill waste you. Im not a murderer, im not a hunter. Im nothing i want to be except for a wanderer. I may be little, i may be small, but inside im nothing but tall. I may trip along the way, i may fall, but ill get up, and ill answer my call. I m not really religious, im different, i could be considered an idiot. I'm a poet, a poet laureate, im an elite duelist, im the best you can get. I make friends easily, easy to get, easy to make fun of, and heck, i dont give a damn. I dont give if you know me, but if you do ill be there. Ill be there to help, i'll be your secret key. You may consider yourself amazing, but i know you arent, and even if you are, i dont give a fart. I put myself under others, no confidence no bravery. But in the right time i provide much clarity, share with me, your life story. I'll hold it dear and it'll be mentioned in the glory. Thats me.[/align'] Interesting to read. Telling a bit about yourself eh?!heres some more poems form me[align=center][spoiler=The Tune of the Twin Towers] The Tune of the Twin TowersFor no one is left' date='for it’s only a terrifying memory,from the white ghosts all a row, From the murky leaking roof to the dampened windows, “therefore” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “ this is the tune of the twin towers. For no one sees them,They sit by the ruble remains of the towers,They cry on what had happened,“Alas” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “this is the tune of the twin towers” If any of the living would go to the remains of the towers now,They would wind up dieing in the rubble just like the others,All of the poor unfortunate souls claimed by the twin towers,“death is sadness” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “this is the tune of the twin towers” I felt this had fairly good imagery.[spoiler=“Follow Your Dreams”']“Follow Your Dreams”Follow your dreams on a journey,Follow your dreams across the country,Follow your dreams to the Pacific Ocean,Follow your dreams to the great caves that have been reformed by man, Follow your dreams and let your heart swore into the land of laudably and dreams… It was nice and inspiring. [spoiler=Hatred]“Hatred”The feeling I hate most,The feeling that controls my anger,The feeling that you get when you want to kill someone,The feeling that lives on a flame that burns brighter every second of every day,The feeling that releases the storm inside,The feeling I always feel is hatred… Hehe I feel that way sometimes too but its generally clouded by insanity. [spoiler=“Captured”]“Captured”Why was I the one,Why did the Fire Lord chose me,Why was I the next Moon GodWhy was I the most powerful out of the Moon tribe, Now because of that I’ve been captured,Now I’m in the Fire Lord’s torture chamber,Now my powers are going to be taken away,Now I’m never going to see Reala again,Now that I’m here my life to over, There is no hope for me now,There won’t be any prayers answered, Here I won’t even see tomorrow,Here I see my life before me,Here my last breath and memory, I see Reala the one I love and the one who has protected me all this time,I see the memory fade to black…. Here being captured really sucks! I really liked this one and thought it was interesting.[/align]well i'm glad you liked them, the one of the tune of the twin towers i had to do for a school project, follow your dreams was also for a school project baised off a movie, hatrad i worte is because i really wanted to kill someone at school, and Captured i wrote because i was borad.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Based on my webcomic that isn't up yet.[spoiler=The Torment of Negine]To think, to dream, to hurt, to scream'Twas all she was on cruel EternNow he has shown her truth, to turnHer life, its meaning, upside downAnd worse, continue, turn aroundDestroy her pure integrity.She can't see MachiavelliHer angel guard that spurred her forthIn life, and with her, her mentorSo now, she breaks, she cries, she screams. You'd need to know Negine and Saedra to understand any of this, so just take it as it is for now. [spoiler=The Tune of the Twin Towers] The Tune of the Twin TowersFor no one is left,for it’s only a terrifying memory,from the white ghosts all a row, From the murky leaking roof to the dampened windows, “therefore” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “ this is the tune of the twin towers. For no one sees them,They sit by the ruble remains of the towers,They cry on what had happened,“Alas” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “this is the tune of the twin towers” If any of the living would go to the remains of the towers now,They would wind up dieing in the rubble just like the others,All of the poor unfortunate souls claimed by the twin towers,“death is sadness” said the shadow’s of the ghosts “this is the tune of the twin towers” It's prose. Cool imagery, though.[spoiler=“Follow Your Dreams”]“Follow Your Dreams”Follow your dreams on a journey,Follow your dreams across the country,Follow your dreams to the Pacific Ocean,Follow your dreams to the great caves that have been reformed by man, Follow your dreams and let your heart swore into the land of laudably and dreams… Pacific Ocean? "Laudably?"[spoiler=Hatred]“Hatred”The feeling I hate most,The feeling that controls my anger,The feeling that you get when you want to kill someone,The feeling that lives on a flame that burns brighter every second of every day,The feeling that releases the storm inside,The feeling I always feel is hatred… How does hatred control anger? Also, random angst FTL.[spoiler=“Captured”]“Captured”Why was I the one,Why did the Fire Lord chose me,Why was I the next Moon GodWhy was I the most powerful out of the Moon tribe, Now because of that I’ve been captured,Now I’m in the Fire Lord’s torture chamber,Now my powers are going to be taken away,Now I’m never going to see Reala again,Now that I’m here my life to over, There is no hope for me now,There won’t be any prayers answered, Here I won’t even see tomorrow,Here I see my life before me,Here my last breath and memory, I see Reala the one I love and the one who has protected me all this time,I see the memory fade to black…. Here being captured really sucks! Background knowledge pl0x. Also, that last line is horrible. You could use some work on conventions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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