Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 *sigh* so... i guess i shouldn't writ anymore pomes and then it wouldn't lead to anymore agruments.....Uh, what? The poem didn't lead to the argument. Actually, it has a great repetitive feel to it. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Monkey I like monkeys soWhy not give me a monkeyAnd for free right now! ^^^lol a monkey haiku Nature Leaves fall pleasantlyFires burn heavenly todayThe wind blows slowly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 The monkey one is goofy. -_- The leaves one is nice though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 thanks. so what do you think of my title? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Sounds like someone's shot up on hallucinogens. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Star Child Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 thanks, i think. i heard it on Simpsons :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Nuclear War It's time for a nuclear war.Each and every day the same..You walk outside, your face falls off,I'm sick of all this acid rain. I had wanted to go on a picnic.But no chance with all these loud alarms..The weather man predicted rain,With scattered showers of atom bombs. I'd wanted to see a concertBut all the players now are dead..I walk back home in the acid rain,Protected by my umbrella of lead.(To protect from the radioactivity,At least that's what the weatherman said..) I wonder if there's missiles,In the city just close to here..I'm gonna pack up my bags and move,And hope for a better year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 That was... random. Rather nonsensical approach to the Apocalypse. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 That was... random. Rather nonsensical approach to the Apocalypse. :? Yes, I admit.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 reminded me of alas, babylon. Great poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Sorry I haven't been on here in a while, but I was very busy with Drumline and I completely forgot about this club. Here's my latest work. This time, doing abit more abstract of a theme, and a different approach. 6 Lined-Stanza Free Verse is actually quite fun. :) [align=center]~*A Fear to Enjoy*~ The fear tastes the same as it wasOn that stormy nightAnd on the day of the dawn. Ravished by the black foreverOn the edge of what was and what were.A fear that shall never grow bitter. Upon this day of which has brokenMany lives, which I have unspoken,I managed to taste a different torment.That fear tasted not like what fear should haveBut tasted better than before.A fear of which, I actually enjoyed. Forever I was intriqued, for I thought it impossibleAs such a fear could never be,Nor could it ever interest.Racing, my mind was, deeply intriqued by this fear.Unmistakable, it was, that this fear could be enjoyed,For it's quality quitely surprised. Mastering this fear was of no interest,Nor was escaping it.I wanted it, I desired it.However, thus fear moved on and cast me aside,For the next fortunate soul to abide.Lo', How I long for that fear to return.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Sorry I haven't been on here in a while' date=' but I was very busy with Drumline and I completely forgot about this club. Here's my latest work. This time, doing abit more abstract of a theme, and a different approach. 6 Lined-Stanza Free Verse is actually quite fun. :) [align=center']~*A Fear to Enjoy*~ The fear tastes the same as it wasOn that stormy nightAnd on the day of the dawn. Ravished by the black foreverOn the edge of what was and what were.A fear that shall never grow bitter. Upon this day of which has brokenMany lives, which I have unspoken,I managed to taste a different torment.That fear tasted not like what fear should haveBut tasted better than before.A fear of which, I actually enjoyed. Forever I was intriqued, for I thought it impossibleAs such a fear could never be,Nor could it ever interest.Racing, my mind was, deeply intriqued by this fear.Unmistakable, it was, that this fear could be enjoyed,For it's quality quitely surprised. Mastering this fear was of no interest,Nor was escaping it.I wanted it, I desired it.However, thus fear moved on and cast me aside,For the next fortunate soul to abide.Lo', How I long for that fear to return.[/align]Sounds like love. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Sorry I haven't been on here in a while' date=' but I was very busy with Drumline and I completely forgot about this club. Here's my latest work. This time, doing abit more abstract of a theme, and a different approach. 6 Lined-Stanza Free Verse is actually quite fun. :) [align=center']~*A Fear to Enjoy*~ The fear tastes the same as it wasOn that stormy nightAnd on the day of the dawn. Ravished by the black foreverOn the edge of what was and what were.A fear that shall never grow bitter. Upon this day of which has brokenMany lives, which I have unspoken,I managed to taste a different torment.That fear tasted not like what fear should haveBut tasted better than before.A fear of which, I actually enjoyed. Forever I was intriqued, for I thought it impossibleAs such a fear could never be,Nor could it ever interest.Racing, my mind was, deeply intriqued by this fear.Unmistakable, it was, that this fear could be enjoyed,For it's quality quitely surprised. Mastering this fear was of no interest,Nor was escaping it.I wanted it, I desired it.However, thus fear moved on and cast me aside,For the next fortunate soul to abide.Lo', How I long for that fear to return.[/align]Sounds like love. :? It's a fear that you have to interpret yourself. For you, it might be interpretted as love. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 i don't really under stand the poem but still it's still good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 If you don't understand my poem, then you are not a poet. Poets can understand the poetry made by other people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 :roll: i'm to a poet! :evil: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 :roll: i'm to a poet! :evil: Then interpret the poem yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 :roll: ok um... i guess your pome means.... that you like fear more then joy i guess.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 :roll: ok um... i guess your pome means.... that you like fear more then joy i guess.... Deeper meaning than that. Come on, Surpreme got very close. What are most people afraid of, yet they enjoy it when it's there anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 ....being dumped by your loved one or they being killed? maybe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 ....being dumped by your loved one or they being killed? maybe No... Still got to go deeper... I'll give you a hint. It's not safe to tell one of these during court. Then, think about the opposite of what you got from that hint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 aw god! one more try....um.... what you can't tell anyone in court is....maybe go out of control so the opposite of that is stay in control? -_- i know i got it wrong...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Lying? Eh? I have to be honest; I'm not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Lying? Eh? I have to be honest; I'm not sure. Spawn got the closest... :) You don't want to lie in court, so what is the opposite of lieing? *Oh, please, get this.. If you don;t, I get to make fun of you for the rest of your life.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Lying? Eh? I have to be honest; I'm not sure. Spawn got the closest... :) You don't want to lie in court' date=' so what is the opposite of lieing? *Oh, please, get this.. If you don;t, I get to make fun of you for the rest of your life.*[/quote'] I'm pretty sure it's telling the truth.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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