Raelen Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 @ Siddiqiua: Yeah' date=' I think I picked up on that. =P[/quote'] k.Jw.If you havent noticed, most of my poems are based on things or names that have affected me in real life. Okay, I'll remember that. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Forbidden Murder Poor the crimson wine,into the diamond cup,as we stab Hades's spine,and reverse the law as blood goes up Our meeting at the gateis this some kind of fateor is was this our sharing hate we broke the forbidden lawthe sword he was chose to drawand our life will soon withdraw --All I can do right now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 [spoiler=An Ode to Futility]Upon that day my life became forlornTurned lost' date=' in search of enigmatic cureThough devils ordinarily wear hornsTrue evil come in subtler ways, more pureFor even sacred love is not immuneTo spark grim strife in ever-tortured soulsThat day so subtly altered my soul's tuneMy love abandoned me, my mind so coldRepentance is mythic simplicityMy last few years are but futility Not like me to write angst like that, but it's easier after watching soundless Slayers dubs at 4:00.[/quote']great job there I really like it, though it did make me feel depressed. In retrospect, I really need to rephrase that... Makes it sound like the person left, when the real result is that no one was there to begin with... 'Course, this whole thing reverses about halfway through, so to finish off my ode to the least antiheroic estrogen brigade bait I've ever heard of... And to Penelope, the epic wife of epic. Being smarter than Odysseus is no small feat, after all.[spoiler=Reverse of Reverse]Somebody tell me what's happened?Confusion has conquered my mind.My eyes claim fate's fury slackenedThat, though, cannot be the case.Someone, then, tell me what's happened.No mirage should hold me back.Love: are you so disillusionedMad, or pretending to show?Steps to reverse me so easy?I think not: tell me what's happened! Because everyone knows one of them would have to be mental. /sarcasm. Now, then, who to do next...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 The winner of the limerick contest will be announced soon! If you want to get in one last effort at a limerick, now would be the time! I have yet to see a perfect limerick. (Besides mine..) =P @ Duckmasta: As one of the judges, please review the pages of the club which contain limericks and tell me which one you like the best. Thaynx! ^_^ Nice poems everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 I'm not really good at limericks, something like Poems... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 I'm not really good at limericks' date=' something like Poems...[/quote'] Well, you can still try. What can you lose? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Let me think it over... I'm working on it.Edit:[spoiler= Emotions] Emotions, Anger, Sadness, and PrideHave all different views with no brideThey all like one anotherJoy is not a botherOf course Sorrow is one where they lied [spoiler=Thunder]Thunder, Thunder, what a roar!You think you're sitting there lifeless with bore?You are wrong with what you makeThey're enough to fill a lake!Thunder, Thunder as strong as a boar! Just so you know, this was my first time making one... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Let me think it over... I'm working on it.Edit:[spoiler= Emotions] Emotions' date=' Anger, Sadness, and PrideHave all different views with no brideThey all like one anotherJoy is not a botherOf course Sorrow is one where they lied [spoiler=Thunder']Thunder, Thunder, what a roar!You think you're sitting there lifeless with bore?You are wrong with what you makeThey're enough to fill a lake!Thunder, Thunder as strong as a boar! Just so you know, this was my first time making one... Thank you for your entry! I have a winner to announce!! And the winner is........................... (insert drumroll here) [spoiler=Winner].::Spawn::.!!!!!!! As promised, you will receive 1 +rep and a special award!!! I have yet to actually work on the award, so give me some time to do that.. Congratulations!! And thank you to all those who entered!! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 I knew I would lose....Well, at least it was fun! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 umm, i love poetry, so in which case, i guess I'm asking if I may join? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 How about a Haiku one, next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 umm' date=' i love poetry, so in which case, i guess I'm asking if I may join?[/font'] yes, you may. @ omega: I'll consider it.. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 oh thank you very much, your a joy ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 oh thank you very much' date=' your a joy ^^[/size'] Why, thaynk you very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 @ omega: I'll consider it.. ^_^ Alright! Thanks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 o_0lol! [spoiler=Unamed.]DesperalityIts a state of normalityConsidered an oddityAnd thats what it'll always beI know its hard to seeAnd its hard to believeBut believe meI've lived through it not a discoveryAnd thats what you needTo overcome just bleedit out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 W00t. Thanks to all other participants. You guys will get the hang of it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 o_0lol! [spoiler=Unamed.]DesperalityIts a state of normalityConsidered an oddityAnd thats what it'll always beI know its hard to seeAnd its hard to believeBut believe meI've lived through it not a discoveryAnd thats what you needTo overcome just bleedit out. Interesting! Some of the lines don't rhyme as well as they should though.. Nice though. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 I have a Haiku... [spoiler=The Old man's beard]There was an Old manHis Beard was so big and thickBirds keep nesting in JK, that's not an actual Haiku... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 actually, my latest poem made was the one in my sig. I don't like it that much, what do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 actually' date=' my latest poem made was the one in my sig. I don't like it that much, what do you guys think?[/quote'] It looks great.It shows the common internal conflict that most people struggle through during their daily lives.I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 o_0lol! [spoiler=Unamed.]DesperalityIts a state of normalityConsidered an oddityAnd thats what it'll always beI know its hard to seeAnd its hard to believeBut believe meI've lived through it not a discoveryAnd thats what you needTo overcome just bleedit out. Meter is off. Irksome. [spoiler=Teh Haiku]Blood and screams and deathMælström of fear's over meI love pain The sadistic dream in a poetic nutshell' date=' I suppose.[spoiler=If the last line is supposed to be five syllables']Blood and screams and deathMælström of blood's over meWhy do I love pain? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 The first one's not a Haiku, but the second one is. Haiku's have 5, 7, then 5 syllables with 3 lines. Your Haiku is still good, it makes me wonder...about dying... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Really? I was under the impression that it was 5, 7, 3. Oh well, good thing I added the extra precaution. We should do sonnets next. :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Haiku? Hmmm.... Restless in the windOur swords will clash tonightThe hate will not ease Pure randomness on maing a Haiku, probably wouldn't work, will it :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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