The Poets Laureate: [Please Lock]

[Toxic-skull]

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Well heres my new pomes i wrote at school again.... also please tell me if i'm getting any better at writting pomes.

[spoiler= Forbidden Love]

“Forbidden Love”

A love that can never be' date='

A love that can’t be real,

A love between a full blooded jester and human,

A love that is still shared between Reala and I,

A love that can only happen in my sweet dreams at night,

A love in a beautiful night when the moon shines bright,

A love that is separated by the day,

A love that is reborn by the night for your love for each other will always be forbidden love….

 

 

[spoiler= The Lies']

“The Lies”

All they say about me are lies,

All they say about me are hurtful things,

All I even know anymore is bedrail and defeat,

All I can say for myself is that theirs no tomorrow,

All I knew in my past was joy,

But know that I’ve hit middle school… every thing is a lie,

All my life is anymore is a living hel*

 

 

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hello am i invasable?!

[Overlord Lucan]

Another poem... (This is a christian poem, somewhat, so be prepared for that)

[spoiler=A Far Away Place]

A Far Away Place

 

 

There is a far away place where all is wrong

There is a far away place where all have dark hearts

There is a far away place where water runs red

And food tastes of sand

There is a far away place where darkness is free

There is a far away place which feeds hatred its strength

There is a far away place where laws don’t exist

And the Wicked roam free

There is a far away place where all stink of despair

There is a far away place with poison in the air

There is a far away place where death shadows all

And scares away light

Yet in this far away place a Beacon stands strong

The Beacon of light shines for the Hopeful and faithful who still stand strong

This Beacon of light has many names in this far away place that lurks here in your home

Life

Jesus

God

Those Hopeful they stand ever strong, for they whisper his name

The name of the strong

 

Im sorry if id doesnt make any sense, I just wrote it now and my brain isn't functioning well at the moment, also the "The far away place was meant to repersent the world.

[Jace Beleren]

can i join here?

 

[spoiler=My name is ................]

My name is Breathless

I can’t breathe when you are near

My name is Memoryless

I have no memories, only fear

My name is Bondless

There can’t be a bond between you and me

My name is Friendless

I don’t have any friends as you can see

My name is Sleepless

I just stay awake and think of you

My name is Painless

There’s only emptiness and nothing you can do

My name is Tearless

There are no tears left to cry

My name is Trustless

Can’t trust anyone just want to die

My name is Skinless

There’s no outside to show me

My name is Nameless

There’s just nothing I can be

My name is Warless

I don’t want to fight

My name is Endless

I want to be forever by your side

 

But I will destroy everything we’ve built together

My name is Loveless,

I can never have true love forever

 

 

[Raelen]

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Well heres my new pomes i wrote at school again.... also please tell me if i'm getting any better at writting pomes.

[spoiler= Forbidden Love]

“Forbidden Love”

A love that can never be' date='

A love that can’t be real,

A love between a full blooded jester and human,

A love that is still shared between Reala and I,

A love that can only happen in my sweet dreams at night,

A love in a beautiful night when the moon shines bright,

A love that is separated by the day,

A love that is reborn by the night for your love for each other will always be forbidden love….

 

 

[spoiler= The Lies']

“The Lies”

All they say about me are lies,

All they say about me are hurtful things,

All I even know anymore is bedrail and defeat,

All I can say for myself is that theirs no tomorrow,

All I knew in my past was joy,

But know that I’ve hit middle school… every thing is a lie,

All my life is anymore is a living hel*

 

 

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hello am i invasable?!

 

No, you're not. You need to fix your grammar in the last poem.

Good though!!

 

@ Steel: You are in! ^_^

 

@ apple: No, it's nice! I like it a lot! It takes courage to write about your faith!

[Sid.]

I wouldnt be surprised if this club gets stickied or wins an award.

[Jace Beleren]

I wouldnt be surprised if this club gets stickied or wins an award.

 

i have to agree with ya

[Raelen]

I wouldnt be surprised if this club gets stickied or wins an award.

 

i have to agree with ya

 

Lol, thaynk you guys! I'm not sure if there are enough poets on YCM to get it stickied, but there might! ^_^

[Mister Sir]

Me needz halp wif sonnets >_>

[Duckmasta2020]

[spoiler=One For One Cost]

She had bruises on her face' date='

From one sided fights,

Emotionally distant,

From long, lonely nights,

 

I saw him hitting her,

I couldn’t stand by,

I wanted that poor excuse,

For a human to die,

 

His arm poised to strike again,

I ran to her aid,

I pushed the man over,

And picked up a spade,

 

The blade on his chest,

My knee on his shoulder,

I back handed him and said,

“That’s no way to scold her!”

 

I grabbed him by the throat,

And slammed his head to the ground,

“Now how does it feel,

To be the one knocked around?”

 

His lifeless body below me,

His blood on my hand,

This was, and yet it wasn’t,

The ending I had planned.

 

I knew my freedom had ended,

Though through this I felt fine,

Because I knew what I had given,

I gave her freedom, at the cost of mine.

 

 

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quite simply epic!

[Raelen]

Me needz halp wif sonnets >_>

 

I did mine about the moon. Write about whatever you want! Be inspired!

[Duckmasta2020]

I was bored so I wrote this and i thought it came out pretty good.

[spoiler=My lady]My lady, you were taken from me

your love, bountiful and free

Was stolen by your kin

To give to better men

But none were worthy of thee.

 

[Enrise]

I got a poem, after much, well, time to myself:

 

[spoiler=Avenging]

Led to the river

we meet the ripper

where the knife makes us shiver

and the stab he shall deliver

 

To love's despair

our hearts cannot be repaired

now the hate he shall beware

and I will avenge when he is unaware

 

I am the incarnate of revenge

To that of which I answer

I will answer to those who want to avenge

and that on the blood there is a dancer

 

 

 

Still working it out a bit... ^_^?

[Raelen]

I got a poem' date=' after much, well, time to myself:

 

[spoiler=Avenging']

Led to the river

we meet the ripper

where the knife makes us shiver

and the stab he shall deliver

 

To love's despair

our hearts cannot be repaired

now the hate he shall beware

and I will avenge when he is unaware

 

I am the incarnate of revenge

To that of which I answer

I will answer to those who want to avenge

and that on the blood there is a dancer

 

 

 

Still working it out a bit... ^_^?

 

You might want to work on the scanning (rhythm) of the poem. Make it sound more flowing. Nice idea! Very..dark!

 

@ Duck: Nice! I really like it!

 

Everyone, I've decided to stop counting the number of poems next to your name on the first post. It encourages you to hurry through writing poems instead of taking your time. (Plus, it's tiring keeping up!) Just to let you all know. ^_^

[Sid.]

lol k

 

[spoiler=The Outcast]

He's the outcast

He owns his own past

Future aint looking bright

But against that

He's always in for a fight.

He's a savior

A Dark Knight

When u stare into his eyes

You cant find any light

He's a jabroni sometimes

But when he is he's always right.

 

He lives in darkness

Thats why you cant see him

but since he isnt heartless

he's someone to believe in.

 

No one knows his name

He holds no fame

No grudges ; no blame

 

He isnt me

I dont want to believe

Is he really?

 

Whats his name?

Sid.

 

 

[Star Child]

[spoiler=When Night Come]

When Night Comes

When Night Comes

Where will you be when night comes?

Do you even know?

No?

Well I do!

 

You will be inside

All alone and scared

Laying on your bed

Wondering when morn will come

Scared to death

Hoping it will go away

That's where you'll be when night comes!

 

But, I will be the 1st

Yes the 1st the night comes to

I will brave the darkness

As if it were my little sibling

And I will let it pass on

Without any fright

As I lay on my bed

Also wondering when morn will rise

Only, not afraid,

Just curious

That's where i'll be!

 

[Silent Omega]

May I join?

[Raelen]

May I join?

 

You are in!

 

@ A-M Lover: Better! I like it! ^_^

 

@ siddiqiua: Sid?? Not a very threatening name..

[Sid.]

@ siddiqiua: Sid?? Not a very threatening name..

 

Does it need too be?

[Raelen]

@ siddiqiua: Sid?? Not a very threatening name..

 

Does it need too be?

 

No.. It kinda takes away from the intensity of the poem though...

[Supreme Gamesmaster]

[spoiler=An Ode to Futility]

Upon that day my life became forlorn

Turned lost, in search of enigmatic cure

Though devils ordinarily wear horns

True evil come in subtler ways, more pure

For even sacred love is not immune

To spark grim strife in ever-tortured souls

That day so subtly altered my soul's tune

My love abandoned me, my mind so cold

Repentance is mythic simplicity

My last few years are but futility

 

 

 

Not like me to write angst like that, but it's easier after watching soundless Slayers dubs at 4:00.

[Sid.]

@ siddiqiua: Sid?? Not a very threatening name..

 

Does it need too be?

 

No.. It kinda takes away from the intensity of the poem though...

 

Yeah. I kinda thought that at first. But i dont think you understand why the name is sid...

[Supreme Gamesmaster]

@ siddiqiua: Sid?? Not a very threatening name..

 

Does it need too be?

 

No.. It kinda takes away from the intensity of the poem though...

 

Yeah. I kinda thought that at first. But i dont think you understand why the name is sid...

 

siddiqiau00

 

Among other reasons.

[Raelen]

[spoiler=An Ode to Futility]

Upon that day my life became forlorn

Turned lost' date=' in search of enigmatic cure

Though devils ordinarily wear horns

True evil come in subtler ways, more pure

For even sacred love is not immune

To spark grim strife in ever-tortured souls

That day so subtly altered my soul's tune

My love abandoned me, my mind so cold

Repentance is mythic simplicity

My last few years are but futility

 

 

 

Not like me to write angst like that, but it's easier after watching soundless Slayers dubs at 4:00.

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Very nice sonnet again!

 

@ Siddiqiua: Yeah, I think I picked up on that. =P

[Duckmasta2020]

[spoiler=An Ode to Futility]

Upon that day my life became forlorn

Turned lost' date=' in search of enigmatic cure

Though devils ordinarily wear horns

True evil come in subtler ways, more pure

For even sacred love is not immune

To spark grim strife in ever-tortured souls

That day so subtly altered my soul's tune

My love abandoned me, my mind so cold

Repentance is mythic simplicity

My last few years are but futility

 

 

 

Not like me to write angst like that, but it's easier after watching soundless Slayers dubs at 4:00.

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great job there I really like it, though it did make me feel depressed.

[Sid.]

@ Siddiqiua: Yeah' date=' I think I picked up on that. =P

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k.

Jw.

If you havent noticed, most of my poems are based on things or names that have affected me in real life.