Xing Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Welcome. This may not be perfect, as it's my first fan-fic. Well, I hope you all liek it!I'll have certain characters in it mainly, and you'll see team-ups you wouldn't expect normally, like Fox being coached by Meta Knight. Here's a few things you may need to know. Italics mean it's a character thoughts. Bolded words reveal a new character of group. [spoiler=Character Bios (Not all)]The Main Character, Fox. Fox will always stand up for his friends, never putting them behind, even if it could mean sacrificing himself. He has the closest bond with Falco, though at times things get rough with them due to Falco's arrogant trait. Fox is featured as a speedy diligent fighter, who becomes the greatest hero in the SSBB Universe.One of Fox's greatest allies and friends, Falco. Falco is a cocky bird, who lacks flight. Falco isn't as fast as Fox, but he's more of an all-around fighter, trying to use a little more power.Meta Knight, who appears as Fox's coach throughout our story. He is also the leader of the Elite Dark's, an evil syndicate who will appear later in the story, so just wait. Meta Knight is skillful in all fighting tactics, and considered the best fighter in the SSBB Universe. Meta Knight shows kindness towards Fox and Falco, until something happens (You'll see =P)Wolf, Fox's greatest rival. Wolf relies on power rather than speed. Using his claws more than his fists, Wolf is a powerful ally to have at your side, that is, if you pay him enough. Later in the story, Wolf must team up with Fox to build up a team and destroy the Elite Dark's. More Character Bios to come!!! [spoiler=Story!!!][spoiler=Chapter 1: The Beginning of Fox's Troubles]One day, as Fox and Falco are flying through the Lylat System, Falco notices something outside of the window. Falco: "Hey, Fox, isn't that Wolf's ship out there?"*Fox quickly turns to face the window*Fox: "No, it can't be, I thought we had him thrown in jail along time ago!"Falco: "You know Wolf, he doesn't like jail, he always finds a sad little way to break out. Maybe they need better security systems."Fox: "Falco, this is serious, don't act silly."*The ship's roof quakes as a force jumps onto it*Falco: "Looks like Wolf got on top of the ship. Let me go out there and give him what's comin' to him, he deserves it. I'll give him a little o' this, and a little o' that!"Fox: "No, Falco, you stay in the ship, just in case. I'll go onto the roof and fight off Wolf."Falco: " Alright, whatever you say, you're the boss."*Fox quickly makes his way onto the roof* On The Roof....Wolf: "Well well, looks like little ole Fox decided to join the party."Fox: "I don't know how you got out of jail, but you'll get what's comin' to you once I'm done with you!"Wolf: "Fox, Fox, Fox, don't you get it? I can't be beaten. Everytime you do, I always come back, and eventually, I will take you down and kill you."Fox: "It doesn't matter, I'll still destroy."Wolf: "Let's dance!"*Fox and Wolf begin to fight. Wolf pulls out his blaster and shoots it at Fox. Fox quickly reacts and activates his reflector, sending Wolf's blast back at him*Wolf: "Agh, you think a reflector can stop me?:Fox: "No, but this can!"*Fox quickly performs an aerial kick against Wolf. Succeeding in the attack, Wolf falls backwards onto the ship. Fox quickly takes out his blaster and holds it to Wolf's head*Wolf: "You wouldn't kill big ole Wolfy now, would you? That's not your style Fox."Fox: "Today it is."*Fox slowly pulls the trigger. As he pulls it, Wolf activates his reflector. Fox fires, and is blown back by the force of the blast.*Fox: "Argh, since when is your reflector powerful enough to hurt me?"Wolf: "Ever since I managed to trick mindless Falco into getting you to modify "his" reflector, which was actually mine."Fox: "So that's why Falco's disappeared."Wolf: " You got it. Now, say your prayers Fox."*Wolf slowly takes out his blaster, which has a sharp claw attached to the bottom, which allows it to be used as a bayonet as well. Wolf begins to assault Fox with the claw, but as he does, a mysterious shadow appears and slashes Wolf with it's golden sword. The mysterious shadow moves his sword with graceful precision, and slices like a blur.*Wolf: "Agh, what are you?"Mysterious: "That is not needed now. Now, flee this ship and leave it's crew members alone, or I shall slice your head off and throw it into the Galaxy."Wolf: "Grr, guess I don't have a choice."*Wolf presses a button on his wrist and his ship appears beside him. As Wolf begins to fly away, he shouts at Fox*Wolf: "Trust me Fox, you haven't seen the last of Wolf O' Donnell!" Once Wolf is out of sight......Fox: "Thank you. Who are you though."Mysterious: "I am called many things, but, you can call me Meta Knight. I hail from the land of Dreamland."Fox: "Thank you, Meta Knight. Would you like to come aboard?"Meta Knight: "No thank you Fox, not today. I'll be back in about a week to begin your training Fox."Fox: "Training, what training?"*As Fox says his final word, Meta Knight disappears in a swoop of his cape. Fox boards the ship, and tells Falco what happened.* Aboard the ship........Falco: "So this Meta Knight guy, just saved you, and disappeared."Fox: "Basically, yeah."Falco: "Meh, you'll see him again, trust me."Fox: "I hope so."Fox: "I wonder what he meant by training though. I guess I'll find out in about a week."*Fox retires to his quarters for the night, thinking about everything that Meta Knight had said.* End of Chapter 1. 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Godot Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 Meh Not Bad Not BAd, I'll Check back soon............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 ~_~ Ok, thnx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 NP Just Saying, I made chapter 3 on Mai Fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 14, 2009 Report Share Posted March 14, 2009 It's nice!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Cool fanfic! I was thinking of making my own Brawl fanfic as well, so I checked this out to see how your's was. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 One Thing. Can G&W be an Assasian of all Evil 3d People?? Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 This is very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 One Thing. Can G&W be an Assasian of all Evil 3d People?? Lol. Uh, ok. I guess he can I'll have Chap 2 up tomorrow. I'm really bored, so I'll do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurboTom Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Wait, I thought Meta Knight was mysterious, but a good guy? Anyway, I have an idea; Can you include Mii in the story? He's not in the actual game, but his attacks could be based on all the Mii based games, like Wii Sports, Wii fit etc. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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