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Why are you so quiet?

 

i'm being ignored?


I DID IT I DID IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I'VE FINALLY MADE AN REALLY EPIC CARD!!!!

 

[spoiler=Epic card]280522r.jpg

[spoiler=Effect]One time per turn before your Battle Phase, you can equip a monster to this card. At the end of your Battle Phase, return that monster to the field. This monster gains the Half ATK of the monster you equipped and the same attribute as that monster. Increase this card power by 500 if:

•This monster has the Light attribue and fight a Dark monster.

•This monster has the Dark attribute and fight a Earth monster.

•This monster has the Earth attribute and fight a Water monster.

•This monster has the Water attribute and fight a Fire monster.

•This monster has the Fire ttribute and fight a Wind monster.

•This monster has the Wind attribute and fight a Light monster.

This monster cannot be equipped by monsters with the Divine attribute.

 

 

I made it divine cause because of its effect it could not be of any attribute i the site don't let use not attribute

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OCG:

 

Official

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Grammar

 

OCG are the terms you use when talking about a card or capitalization things. For example:

 

You can make this card attack the other player.= wrong

This card can attack your opponent directly.=right

 

Matt's card:

"One time per turn" First 4 words there is an error. The correct term is "Once per turn"

 

"before your Battle Phase," This is not a time period. "before your Battle Phase" = Main Phase 1. So the correct term would be: "during your Main Phase 1,"

 

"you can equip a monster to this card." Yeah, I think this is alright. Except maybe it should be: "you can equip 1 monster you control to this card."

 

"At the end of your Battle Phase," Again, this is not a specific time period. So "During your Main Phase 2"

 

"return that monster to the field." That's not really specific. "return that monster to your field in face-up ATK position."

 

"This monster gains the Half ATK" Should be: "Increase this monster's ATK by half the original ATK"

 

"of the monster you equipped" = "of the equipped monster."

 

"and the same attribute as that monster." = "This monster gains the equipped monster's Attribute."

 

"Increase this card power by 500 if:" This is all wrong. Your terms are off. You would never use the word "power" in a card effect. Correct: "Increase this monster's ATK and DEF by 500 when:"

•This monster has the Light attribue and fight a Dark monster. "fight" is not a term.

•This monster has the Dark attribute and fight a Earth monster.

•This monster has the Earth attribute and fight a Water monster.

•This monster has the Water attribute and fight a Fire monster.

•This monster has the Fire ttribute and fight a Wind monster.

•This monster has the Wind attribute and fight a Light monster.

This monster cannot be equipped by monsters with the Divine attribute.

 

I'll just give the correct OCG for the first one: "This monster has the attribute LIGHT and battles a DARK monster."

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