Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Nah, i actually quite like it ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Thanks.And Don't Worry Rua121Lua He'll Be Annoying Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 [align=center]Nice!Sorry about not reading them until now but I just got back online!These are really good!So the crew s complete now right?And it's Cove vs Poseidon in Chapter 5?Really good work![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Thnx :)Next Chapter It's Me V You Lol :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 [align=center]Great!lol :lol: Looking forward to it![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Might Get Next Chapter Up Tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 k i read up to ch. 4. It's good but.... as explained, my character is very shy. He seemed a little too open. I can imagine him taking off while you guys are asleep, leaving a note that says he just isn't ready to be in the "crew". He really is to quiet.. but w.e. Your story, man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 i've read up to chapter 4. seems ok but from the battles you seem to make it sound as if they are too easy for cubone. you should make it sound as if he's having a harder time at battling and/or make him lose a few of them along the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 yes, that sounds better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 i have someone who agrees with me so you better take the advice cove. thanks for agreeing shiko Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 yes u better. Or else >=D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 ok so i check the posts on this and i didn't notice this at first but anyways.Professor Bark: Calm Down, there are two Pokemon left anyway.Cove & Poseidon: Few! <---That's spelt wrong if it's meant to be a sigh of relief. this is how you spell it --> Phew Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 hey fallen. read my fanfic? no one will except cove. Is it that bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 i'll read it in a min then, i just need to check my own, won't be long Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 k thanks. and tell your friends =D i want it to be popular. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Thnx For Advice~Bump~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 [align=center]Hey Cove, when will you be adding chapter 5?It sounds good![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Dunno.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 [align=center]OK!Have you even started on it yet?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 No, but only cause my stuff is on another comp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 ~Bump~Doesn't Look I Can Get Chapter 5 Up 2Day Either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 [align=center]Oh OK!When will it be up?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 Definatly Tomorrow , Maybe 2Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezio Posted March 17, 2009 Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 [align=center]OK!Cool![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2009 ~Added Chapter 5.My Longest Chapter Yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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