Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Nice chapter 1, spelling error already pointed out, but overall, nice :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 ~Added Chapter 2+rep for commenting in my fanfic! ty! and great first chapter. I've started chap 6 part 1 if yer interested. It's longer than my normal "parts" it's almost the length of a whole chapter! But that's cuz there gunna be longer now. Gl and all! Nice chapter 1' date=' spelling error already pointed out, but overall, nice :)[/quote'] Thanks For The Comments :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Also liked Chapter 2, but i would prefer the chapters in paragraphs... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 ~Spelling Error FixedAlso liked Chapter 2' date=' but i would prefer the chapters in paragraphs...[/quote'] I'll Try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Ok, and one more thing, plz stop double posting, it looks untidy, if you want to add someting else, edit the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Thts What I Do.But To Seporate The Thingys I Do The Hr Thingy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Oh, sorry it looks like double post :lol: :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 ~ Added Chapter 3 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Love it, still finding it hard to read because its not in paragraphs..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Where Should I Put The Paragrahps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Just write the chapters again, but in paragraphs, do a chapter at a time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 I Am Doing A Chapter At A Time........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Good, your one step there :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 :lol: Thanks :)In Chapter 4 I Think I'm Gonna Complete The Crew By Introducing Kevin.Then Chapter 5 I Might Have Cove V Poseidon.What Ya Think For My Chapter Ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Sounds Great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Welcome :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Should I Start Chapter 4 Or Wait A Little While? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 I don't mind......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Well, Your The Only Online Reader.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Ok, go on then :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Kl Kl :)I'll Start Now :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Okaly Dokaly! :D :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Added Chapter 4 (But I Think It's My Worst Chapter So Far) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Me likey! When Leo going to start getting annoying? Nice Job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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