Dwhale Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serrenox Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 Where is Draw Back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 It still needs work.Discarding a card from your hand is helping its effect,because that puts another card in the Graveyard that you can remove from play next turn to have the card attack directly.Keep trying,the image is too good to pass up,and I can definitely see it as a real card when you edit the effect.I would decrease the amount of ATK it gains for every monster removed from play,and I think you should have to pay a decent amount of Life Points for it to attack or maybe lower its original ATK?Something of the sort anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted September 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 Do you think it'll work if you pay life points? @Serrenox it seems like when I go on that account the CPU quota last for about an hour Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 Try this: If you remove 1 monster in your Graveyard from play and pay 500 Life Points, this card may attack your opponent's Life Points directly this turn. If your Life Points are equal to 500 or lower, this card is destroyed at your next End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted September 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 FIXED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 Looks good to me.Wait for some more comments to see what they think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted September 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 @Deity Mitsu Ok Thanks Now Bring On The Comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
celoco28 Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 This one is hot too. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted October 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Thanks celocoI Workin Hard On Em ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
celoco28 Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Thats cool, I'm still learning. I got great idea. But a sucky computer to get the graphics in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Sorry if this is bad criticizing but the effect with good OCG should be like this: By removing a monster from your Graveyard and by paying 500 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly this turn. When your Life Points are equal to or lower than 500 destroy this card during your next End Phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Okay. Little grammar problems. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted October 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 Thanks 4 The High Rates Guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted October 20, 2007 Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 uh, 4.57/5the pic is good butit seems like it's missing something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted October 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 uh' date=' 4.57/5the pic is good butit seems like it's missing something.[/quote'] What Is It Missing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gary ArchKnight Posted October 20, 2007 Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 nice card good effect 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted October 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 Thanks Gary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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