Docomodake Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 This is a YGO-world story based on the travels and battles of Prince Raiou, a to-be king. [spoiler=Prologue - Yamanaro Raiou, King of the Thunder Territory]“Please sir,” the electricity-emitting creature spoke softly. “May I come in?” The creature was a dark-blue for the most of it, while cream-coloured conductors substituted for limbs. To the side of the creature were two glorious golden rings with sharp, needle-like points emitting upwards from it.“Sorry, kid,” the man said, peering from a rectangular hole in his house’s locked doorway. “This place is Warriors only. That means humans only. Which means you need to leave.” “All I require is lodgings, Captain Runnel! I shall pay for my stay with my life in battle.” Said the creature. Captain Runnel pondered it, and then posed the question, “What’s your name, kid?” “Yamanara Raiou, sir,” Raiou answered. “Prince Yamanara Raiou.” “P-Prince of the Thunder Territory?!” exclaimed Captain Runnel. He calmed himself and began to think. “If you can get the Thundies to ally with us, all lodgings are free and all Thundies are welcome.” “Thundy is a really derrogatory term,” Raiou explained. “I don’t think you want us to call you bloodthirsty demon savages; do you?” “Uhm, well, no.” Captain Runnel said, lowering his head as he opened the door for Prince Raiou, of the Thunder Territory. It's short stfu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Umm.. I don't know what to say.. It's short, but I won't "stfu". Needs length to it. But I noticed that you were pretty good with detail, so I will ait for chapter 1 to rate it for real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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