Fallen Hero Posted March 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 I guess' date=' though I like that thing where rocks actually float up do to his energy, but hell, it's your fic.[/quote'] ok then how about the rocks rise through some power and makes the rocks cover his body to create his beast form, still just an idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 OK, sounds good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 you sure you want that i'm only suggesting you don't have to accept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 No, it sounds good. Really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 ok, now i just go to ask flash now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Chapter 2 is up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 well doesn't look like I missed TOO much yet, fic is coming along fantastically to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 you gonna request a character then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 not just yet at least. I want to see a few more chaps to see how everything will develop out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Chapter 2 is awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Thanks dude, i was a bit worried with that chapter to be honest but i'm glad it went well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 you going to have chap 3 up anytime soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 i'll try to post a couple more chapters on hopefully today and also flash if you and fenrir want to make any more character requests thats fine by me, i don't seem to be attracting a lot people's attention right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 the fic just got started, with new writers it takes more than just 2 chaps to get many people's attention (no offense, that's just how it works) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 oh ok it's just i need a few more characters as escapees and maybe a hunter or 2 for now at least Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 I hope you can get those submissions soon then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 i might be able to do another chapter at least but then me, flash and fenrir (if they don't mind) will have to make another character each i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 *shrugs* that's fine with me, I just hope it won't take too long Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 well hopefully they'll see it and help i guess hopefully the next chapter will be up in the (for me anyway) afternoon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 which will be morning my time, I'll try to review as soon as I see it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Nice new chapter. Most of your sentences are run ons. You have to place some periods. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 erm.. ok my bad and what do you mean by periods, i can't remember what they are Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 This is a period -> . You need to place them in some sentences because they are too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 oh ok i'll repair the mistakes soon then, i'll do a sort of maintenance check and repair any mistakes people point out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 No problemo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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