ragnarok1945 Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 fighting is fine as long as you don't cross the line for them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 Sorry i haven't be online any earlier been busy.1. omega David is accepted but i need to think how the revival ability would be possible though, if you can enlighten me on how it is done would be helpful. 2. What have i missed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 15, 2009 Report Share Posted March 15, 2009 You haven't missed anything really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 oh ok, i'll try brainstorming on my next chapter then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 will it be up by this week, Fallen Hero? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 i'm trying to, just not in that sort of mood to write at this moment in time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 that's ok. Hey are we going to get to see deep relationships later on this fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 i'll be thinking about it soon enough. Fistly though i'm trying to decide which chapters the other characters are gonna make their first appearance in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 will there be many cases of getting off on the wrong foot then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 i'll try to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 You missed my critiquing. If you're really 18 like your profile says' date=' you should be able to write even a decent fanfic. You rarely capitalize "I", and you often forget to use periods when necessary. I'm sorry, I know you wrote more, but I just had to stop during Chapter 1 to say this. I took a quick peak at your other chapters, and I didn't see much improvement.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 zzzzzzzzzzzzzthat's not meant to be spamming, just for some reason it won't show the last post if it started a new page so i typed the above to see what it was before anyone complains.You missed my critiquing. If you're really 18 like your profile says' date=' you should be able to write even a decent fanfic. You rarely capitalize "I", and you often forget to use periods when necessary. I'm sorry, I know you wrote more, but I just had to stop during Chapter 1 to say this. I took a quick peak at your other chapters, and I didn't see much improvement.[/quote'] To be honest you sound as if your trying to undermine what i have done so far and it won't work. i already know i'm not good at literacy and the whole capitalizing "I" thing, i'll do it when i have the patience too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 oh don't worry about that Fallen Hero, the rest of us enjoy your fic just fine, we just hope for you to be able to update the next chapter as soon as possible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 thanks ragnarok. like i said it doesn't bother me. the next chapter will be up before today ends for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Me, I just hope you show more of the military's stupidity in the upcoming chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 what do you mean by stupidity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 as with many sci-fi films when you try to harness the power of a gene, the military tends to lose control of ti. For example, you can create a superpowerful beast with this gene in thinking it would do your bidding, but you can't control it. Not that I feel that's what will happen with your fic, but you know what I'm getting at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 yeah i know what you're getting at Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 good. You don't have to make it so chaotic or bloody, but most sci-fi films have the military stupid, so I'm waiting to see if you'd make them the same way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 zzzzzzzzzzzzzthat's not meant to be spamming' date=' just for some reason it won't show the last post if it started a new page so i typed the above to see what it was before anyone complains.[hr']You missed my critiquing. If you're really 18 like your profile says' date=' you should be able to write even a decent fanfic. You rarely capitalize "I", and you often forget to use periods when necessary. I'm sorry, I know you wrote more, but I just had to stop during Chapter 1 to say this. I took a quick peak at your other chapters, and I didn't see much improvement.[/quote'] To be honest you sound as if your trying to undermine what i have done so far and it won't work. i already know i'm not good at literacy and the whole capitalizing "I" thing, i'll do it when i have the patience too. If you're going to use "undermine", then fine. I'm just critiquing you for not having an understanding of basic literacy just because you're impatient. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Fallen Hero, is the next chapter almost ready yet or do you need more suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Sorry i haven't be online any earlier been busy.1. omega David is accepted but i need to think how the revival ability would be possible though' date=' if you can enlighten me on how it is done would be helpful. 2. What have i missed?[/quote']If I'm right...Doesn't a Pheonix's Tears usually help revive the Wound? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 Sorry i haven't be online any earlier been busy.1. omega David is accepted but i need to think how the revival ability would be possible though' date=' if you can enlighten me on how it is done would be helpful. 2. What have i missed?[/quote']If I'm right...Doesn't a Pheonix's Tears usually help revive the Wound? If I recall correctly, isn't that from FF? Therefor, it doesn't count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 16, 2009 Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 When is next chapter up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fallen Hero Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2009 soon flash but after that i'm thinking of posting a few chapters together every week or something along those lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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