-Kai- Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 These are a couple of sigs I made in honor of the Master Rapper of the Phillipines who recently died. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Jesus Christ, these were both effect rapedYou overflooded the heck out of them with c4ds First:OvercontrastedNo lighting, flow, depth, or blendingWay too many lines just flying everywhere and kill the flow and really just cover up everythingThe brushing along the bottom and around the star ruin the lighting, and just seem so completely out of placeLeft side just looks wrong with all that whiteFar background looks too blurred to go with the focal and effectsThe white around the focal really hurts the blending Second:OvercontrastedNo lighting, flow, depth, or blendingThe stars are really out of place and the lighting from them sort of completely does not go with the focal at allBackground looks like a mesh of effects over varying degrees of mushThere is no real cohesion with anything, the deep red and black to the purple and whatever makes no sense and going with the lightly added orange over a more detailed yellow seems totally wrongBlack around the focal kills the blending and makes it seem too cartoonish Backgrounds need to be more solid and unchaotic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tabris Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Filipino you are? Even as I'm not really one who meddles with sigs, lemme say this: Keep the second, with all its imperfections. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Jesus Christ' date=' these were both effect rapedYou overflooded the heck out of them with c4ds First:OvercontrastedNo lighting, flow, depth, or blendingWay too many lines just flying everywhere and kill the flow and really just cover up everythingThe brushing along the bottom and around the star ruin the lighting, and just seem so completely out of placeLeft side just looks wrong with all that whiteFar background looks too blurred to go with the focal and effectsThe white around the focal really hurts the blending Second:OvercontrastedNo lighting, flow, depth, or blendingThe stars are really out of place and the lighting from them sort of completely does not go with the focal at allBackground looks like a mesh of effects over varying degrees of mushThere is no real cohesion with anything, the deep red and black to the purple and whatever makes no sense and going with the lightly added orange over a more detailed yellow seems totally wrongBlack around the focal kills the blending and makes it seem too cartoonish Backgrounds need to be more solid and unchaotic[/quote'] ^ That and more importantly SAVE AS PNG!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 It's called eraser =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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