rholowie Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 What do you think? All comments and advice are appreciated.:D These are all unrelated, just so you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
larharlx Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 cool and a nice effect 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted September 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROY Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 its okay 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted September 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 Thanks for commenting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bromlee Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 It's great!!! 9.5/10! I love the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flomaster Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 Creative. I like....9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 great card. :D 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted September 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Thanks everybody:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Graveyard should be capitalized and result of battle should not be capitalized.Also,it should be written in the text as :If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle, decrease the original ATK of this card by 200 instead of sending it to the Graveyard after damage calculation. I don't really get the image,is it supposed to be like a factory line?If so, I think this would be cool as an Equip Spell card written like this:"If a monster equipped with this card would be destroyed as a result of battle, decrease the equipped monsters original ATK by 200 instead of sending it to the Graveyard after damage calculation. If the original ATK of a monster equipped with this card is equal to 1400 or lower, destroy the monster the next time it is attacked." For your original idea,I give it an 8.5/10.Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gungeransu Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Hmm.... there are four things in the picture....When it dies, it loses 200 ATK....4 times 200 is 800....2200 minus 800 makes 1400....You'll be out of guys in the picture, so it dies.Nice tie in with the pic, but Mitsu's kinda right. It doesn't seem like it should be a Monster card to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted September 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 I went with both of your advice and made it into an equip spell. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Nice.Love it now.10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted September 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Up dated with "Dame of Zephyr" and "Infected" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rholowie Posted September 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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