Haseo Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 This is a poem i have written and comments are appreciated! Thirteen Ways of Seeing the World A place full of disasters Conflicts never endPeople die and cryBut the world can’t change itself A place where peace comes and goesThe world goes to war while the babies are just bornThey wake up to a world of mistakesBut these mistakes can’t be resolved themselves A place where children can grow and learnKnowledge that will make the world betterA bright light that can make this world betterA better world means better lives and better people A place where it is hard to express how you feelTelling people your point of viewStanding up for your beliefsHaving CourageTelling the world who you are, who you want to be A place where people can make dreams come trueDreams are the road to happinessDreams can make the world a better placeHaving a better world means being able to have more dreams A place where life is a roadA road that has many good and bad turnsYou’re the only one who can pick the turns you want or don’t wantYour decision can help this world to make it better or to make it worse A place where you can stop and thinkIs this the right thing to do?Is this what I want to do?Well this make me a better person or make me the person I don’t want to be?Can I find the right answer to all the questions in the world?The world is a place where you can answer these questions. A place where you can find happinessHappiness in your friendsHappiness in your familyHappiness in your loved oneHappiness is everywhere in the worldIf the world had more happiness then the world would grow A place where you can be helped and can helpHelping is the gift of lifeHelping others will make happiness come trueHelping means that you will feel better about yourselfHelping is a key to the heart of the worldThe world’s heart can only be opened with this key A place where you will never be aloneLoneliness is just a stage where you can’t make friendsBeing Lonely is a problem Everyone is lonely until they can find the thing in the world that makes them feel goodThis thing can’t be found if we don’t have a better world A place where you will never see darknessDarkness is the thing that makes us feel badFeeling bad would make the world worseMaking the world better is the key to no Darkness Have you ever had a nightmare?Having nightmares means that the world cannot developHave you ever had a good dream?Having good dreams means the world is becoming betterHave you ever had either?Having either means the world is developing by taking time The place that has all this is the worldThis place will never become better until we become betterThis place will become better if you stop conflictsHelping is the first key to make the world betterThe second key is happinessThe third key to making the world better is having dreams and making them come trueThe fourth key is CourageThe fifth key to making the world better is how you live your lifeThe last key is youYou can change this world, but not if you don’t have the keys to help this world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 I am giving you advice via PM. But about the Poll, it really is all of the above. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 BumpPLz more people Comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 5, 2009 Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 BumpPLz more people Comment You have to wait 24 hours before you bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenosagaFan123 Posted March 5, 2009 Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 That was really pretty keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkfreya Posted March 5, 2009 Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 you do great poems more than me plus its much longer i mostly make short ones Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ιϻϻσяταᴌ Ωϻεϛα Posted March 6, 2009 Report Share Posted March 6, 2009 Like I said via PM, good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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