Queen-Dragoon Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Chapter 2-4 has been posted! Enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 13, 2009 Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 Heh, evolution is awesome ain't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2009 Bump! More will be up in a day or two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Chapter 3-1 is up. Enjoy finalflash! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Nice chapter. Though personally, Riolu and Lucario have always looked like a jackal to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Cheers. It's just my mental image though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 I see what your getting at. Anyways, hoping for an epic battle next part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Chapter 3-1 is up. Enjoy finalflash! I sure did! But I hope that you remember that she rather prefers to paint pictures of her Pokémon rather that fighting with them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Chapter 3-1 is up. Enjoy finalflash! I sure did! But I hope that you remember that she rather prefers to paint pictures of her Pokémon rather that fighting with them. I know. It's just Riolu doesn't have any indirect moves to work into a contest. I am making it that he hates to hurt so he has never battled another Pokemon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 That's great news to hear! Because he's my fav, I would HATE it if Riolu lost his EPIC CUTENESS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amaterasu Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 great fanfic 10/10Here is a character I would like to suggest. (sound familliar?) Name: James ArmstrongAge: 25Personality: Perviness to rival BrockAppearance: IDK you decide.Pokemon: Uses any type but mostly underrated pokemon.How he/she meets the main group: Pokemon Battle vs. Brock? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Hey! I was about to suggest another!:P Name: Drake McPhilleasAge: 19Personality: Quite the opposite of her younger sister Stephanie, or Steph that he calls her, Drake is always serious, and prefers cool, powerful Pokémon that he trains constantly to make them stronger.Appearance: Pokemon: Charizard, Aggron, MetagrossHow he/she meets the main group: Idk, you decide, but he MUST meet them in a chapter with Stephanie! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Hey, Dragoon. When will next chapter be up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Hey' date=' Dragoon. When will next chapter be up?[/quote'] About a third of it is done. If I get a wave of inspiration it might be done in 5-6 hours (I have other stuff to do in between). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Well, you still have your loyal fans. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Chapter 3-2 has been posted. Chapter 3 has been moved to my second post. Also I've updated the Character Application Form to show what I need. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Wow, that is really interesting. This is getting good, Pokemon with mixed up genetics? Nice, nice, nice. I loved how you introduced my character. Seriously, loved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Chapter 3 part 2 is sweet! The plot is getting thicker! So, what is it exactly that caused that Houndoom's cell change? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Chapter 3 part 2 is sweet! The plot is getting thicker! So' date=' what is it exactly that caused that Houndoom's cell change?[/quote'] You'll find out later in the story. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Nice! Another thing: Why is Stephanie acting so cowardly? I said that she didn't like to fight, but I don't want her to act like a coward.:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 I'm gonna explain that. Remember she was ambushed and attacked herself, not just Riolu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Oh, I remember! Wonder when my other char will show up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 It's a good concept for a story but I can see that it still needs a lot of development. I think it'd be original if you strayed away from general Gym Battles for awhile or random battles, I don't know but you need to make the story your own still. Keep at it, and good luck in the future =)8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Not bad, not bad at all. You could use some more dramatic spacing, and more varied sentence structure. It's great action, but with the current spacing and repetition, it's kinda boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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