Aelsthla-Mental Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 I would like my fanfic reviewed. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-64021.html Nothing special alas, I was hoping to start it seeming generic and then *surprise* (course, kinda spoiled now...) And alas haven't gotten to that section yet... Ok, that's a lame excuse. I'd like you to review it, be tough but fair, and hopefully it will allow me to improve. If you can't, aahh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Would you please review my Fan Fiction' date=' Pokemon - Just Another Kidd?[/quote'] I require 1 link. I would like my fanfic reviewed. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-64021.html Nothing special alas' date=' I was hoping to start it seeming generic and then *surprise* (course, kinda spoiled now...) And alas haven't gotten to that section yet... Ok, that's a lame excuse. I'd like you to review it, be tough but fair, and hopefully it will allow me to improve. If you can't, aahh well.[/quote'] Added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holy Babylon Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 It doesn't really have much to do with Yugioh or anything else, it's just a short story. I guess the Mods liked it though, I wasn't sure if they would lock it or not. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-94819.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 Well I got one myself. That was actually my second one. So far, I got few people replying up; just the same 3 peoples all the time. So please see it & give your comments about it. Link - http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-103912.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 I have a smexeh new assistant! For now on, you can request either me or crimson2432 for a review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨βlack☨ Posted March 9, 2009 Report Share Posted March 9, 2009 I will be checking Jovi's and Faint Brushfires tomorrow. We will catch up to all of you soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Do not bump thread that wasn't created by you. ~Reported~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shiko11 Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 my old fanfic crapped out. Im dropping it now. xD! anyway, now i have time for a new one !i dont even hav ch. 1 up. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-108402-post-1914354.html#pid1914354 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-89474.html Before you start reading, please notice the following things: Length: My story is divided into Parts. Parts are divided in small chapters, each of them +/- 2 pages. The Parts, however, are +/- 7 pages. Therefore I'd like you to judge the "Length" by comparing to what I call Parts. Sorry if this is a bit confusing. Characters: They might seem like Mary Sue's and Gary Stu's so far, but I'll get to Character development when the big battles are about to take place. I know I should've done some of that at the start, but I've think I gave Saitu, my main character, some good moments to show what he's worth. Originality: Yes. The plot starts way too late and the tournament that seems to be the main plot is actually a fuzzy sub-plot. Book 2 will have a better plot. S/G: I am from Belgium, so you can't compare my story to that of Native English Speakers. If you do, try to keep it in mind that I did my best. Also, Parts I-IV were typed with an old keyboard of which the "D"-Button didn't work properly... Enjoy your read! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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