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The Night [A Hellsing Fanfic] Chapter 12 up!


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i have a question for everyone.

 

Does everyone like how their character is(personality, fighting style, etc) in the fan-fic?

 

i ain't got much problems with my character even though he sounds like he's not the brightest i the group (which is like me) he's still a good fighter. my only problem would be with a section in chapter 6 which says

[There was alot of containment tubes filled with green goo, and there were humans floating inside. They were mutilated, into the undead!

 

"Uugh!" Kevin felt like throwing up. "What IS that?!"]

 

i'm sure after everything he's seen he could at least stomach that.

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hey finalflash i got a question to ask you about chapter 7.

 

"Hehe! Hi!" she said. "You wanna dance with me?" the others were either laughing inside, or was deeply shocked.

 

since you put others there does that mean she was asking the question to just one person cos if it is who was she talking to.

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