Dream2Defy Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Here are a bunch sigs i have made thier my first sigs on gimp Made for Dragons shop Made for my shop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 dont put text if ur a starter!!and it dosent blend....2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Not the best sigs i have seen but don't add texy because it never makes the sig look better.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted February 27, 2009 Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 I think you get better, as you progress, keep making sigs, and they'll be top notch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream2Defy Posted March 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 wow u have improved but dont use c4d,s so much try brushing and smudging Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 First:Too bigAlright blending with the bright stuff on the sidesBlack effects on the left don't workLights are giving off a color different than what the focal hasPen tool around the finger is boring, do more than just a single lineWireframes seem rather choppy and should have been incorporated more than just a little stuff on the topNo depthLighting is lacking, have it semi acceptable on the left but on the right it dullsWierd ugly smoke thing on his right is badBorder is uglyText is ugly Second:Background is boring and emptyFocal seems partially transparentLighting is bad, just making on side darker without fixing the previously brighter spots doesn't mean it looks like it's shadedDon't just use an effects c4d as your backgroundRender does not belong at allThat hexagon at the top just seems wrong Third:Bad render and it's a little lqNo lighting, blending, or depthFocal is too far to the sideBackground is dull and some parts seem rather confused or mixed badlyRender does not belongThe lines are really badText is fugly Fourth:Just a mash of effects, it looks like you found a couple c4ds and threw them togetherFocal does not belong at allText is really ugly Fifth:See Fourth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Iron-mans face seems compacted. COMPACTED!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haseo Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Cool! You have improved a little.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream2Defy Posted March 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 First:Too bigAlright blending with the bright stuff on the sidesBlack effects on the left don't workLights are giving off a color different than what the focal hasPen tool around the finger is boring' date=' do more than just a single lineWireframes seem rather choppy and should have been incorporated more than just a little stuff on the topNo depthLighting is lacking, have it semi acceptable on the left but on the right it dullsWierd ugly smoke thing on his right is badBorder is uglyText is ugly Second:Background is boring and emptyFocal seems partially transparentLighting is bad, just making on side darker without fixing the previously brighter spots doesn't mean it looks like it's shadedDon't just use an effects c4d as your backgroundRender does not belong at allThat hexagon at the top just seems wrong Third:Bad render and it's a little lqNo lighting, blending, or depthFocal is too far to the sideBackground is dull and some parts seem rather confused or mixed badlyRender does not belongThe lines are really badText is fugly Fourth:Just a mash of effects, it looks like you found a couple c4ds and threw them togetherFocal does not belong at allText is really ugly Fifth:See Fourth[/quote'] Ok...Wow thats a lot what do u mean render dont belongWhats a focal?Iron-mans face seems compacted. COMPACTED!!! What does Compacted mean?Cool! You have improved a little.6/10 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Ok...Wow thats a lot what do u mean render dont belongWhats a focal? The render does not fit in with the surroundings given to them by the rest of the sig. Like with Iron Man, he looks smooth and simple while the background is chaotic and rough A focal is the character or point that is the center of attention in the sig, such as the characters you have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream2Defy Posted March 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Why do you think the text on the fifth is so bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Why do you think the text on the fifth is so bad It does not belong, the text should blend in with the rest and look like it's a part of the whole thing and not just something added onToo complex, the curviture of the font makes it not fit into the style of the sigToo many words, the text really shouldn't be that long unless done under certain circumstances. Either way, don't bother with text until you've gotten better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream2Defy Posted March 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 k thanks for the page long criticismlol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream2Defy Posted March 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 BumpJust posted new sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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